His Burning Desire

Oh! This write is making me insane. What a brightness of loving emotions you have pasted her. Oh, so beautiful and attractive. I adore that Arab Angel in the pic. - Aug Black

Let's go camping. :)

Love it,,,,, reminds me Of Gypsy Woman by Bryan Hyland :) Love that song.

The beautiful image goes so well with your perfect one liner.

You do sensual so well Andrea! I love this! : )

Smokin' hot! I love this one and hope to see it high on the winners' list!! Cool pic, by the way! Regards, John.

ha ha, so glad you went for this gem. love it

Great poem, Andrea: She's on fire!

Nothing lustier than a gypsies fire lol...best of luck my friend...god bless...^WW^

Heart aflame! Hot, hot, hot! Excellent dear, Andrea!

Very nicely done Andrea..Best wishes

i can see the scene even without your lovely photo!GL

Wow! What a pretty write. The pic also contributes greatly. Good luck within.

This is so good Andrea. Both of them and you are on fire with this one.

I hope that she doesn't become a living flame..Reads like a winner to me..Great picture that you have posted..Thanks for all the visits to my work in the past and for those that will come in the future..I have written a short story entitled "Unkie" ..Sometimes would you read it and let me know what you honestly think..Sara

Cool picture. Nothing like a beautiful dance to make your blood run hot. Great job Andrea, Good luck in the contest. - Dean

Wow! Fantastic line with perfect picture to go with:)

I believe we have a winner here! Your poem is such fun, the lust found within it is dominated by your word selection "gyrates," you even have an internal rhyme! What an exceptional write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this gem of a poem this morning! Great Work!

Hi Andrea, What a good one-liner for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

:) Good one, Andrea...My favorite Disney character is Esmeralda...My alter ego. Hmmmmm. ;) Good write...loved it.