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eyes aglow, she gyrates round the gypsies' fire. . . his burning desire July 25, 2017 for the LUST Poetry Contest of Lewis Raynes

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Augustus Black

Date: 8/3/2017 12:54:00 PM

Oh! This write is making me insane. What a brightness of loving emotions you have pasted her. Oh, so beautiful and attractive. I adore that Arab Angel in the pic. - Aug Black

Robert Johnson

Date: 7/29/2017 8:45:00 PM

Let's go camping. :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/29/2017 12:44:00 PM

Love it,,,,, reminds me Of Gypsy Woman by Bryan Hyland :) Love that song.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 7/29/2017 9:40:00 AM

The beautiful image goes so well with your perfect one liner.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/28/2017 12:32:00 AM

You do sensual so well Andrea! I love this! : )

John Michaels

Date: 7/27/2017 3:31:00 PM

Smokin' hot! I love this one and hope to see it high on the winners' list!! Cool pic, by the way! Regards, John.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/27/2017 11:54:00 AM

ha ha, so glad you went for this gem. love it

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/27/2017 8:07:00 AM

Great poem, Andrea: She's on fire!

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/27/2017 7:11:00 AM

Nothing lustier than a gypsies fire lol...best of luck my friend...god bless...^WW^

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/27/2017 5:47:00 AM

Heart aflame! Hot, hot, hot! Excellent dear, Andrea!

Joseph May

Date: 7/26/2017 6:38:00 PM

Very nicely done Andrea..Best wishes

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2017 5:06:00 PM

i can see the scene even without your lovely photo!GL

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/26/2017 5:00:00 PM

Wow! What a pretty write. The pic also contributes greatly. Good luck within.

Jean Murray

Date: 7/26/2017 3:35:00 PM

This is so good Andrea. Both of them and you are on fire with this one.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2017 1:47:00 PM

I hope that she doesn't become a living flame..Reads like a winner to me..Great picture that you have posted..Thanks for all the visits to my work in the past and for those that will come in the future..I have written a short story entitled "Unkie" ..Sometimes would you read it and let me know what you honestly think..Sara

Dean Wood

Date: 7/26/2017 10:16:00 AM

Cool picture. Nothing like a beautiful dance to make your blood run hot. Great job Andrea, Good luck in the contest. - Dean

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/26/2017 8:06:00 AM

Wow! Fantastic line with perfect picture to go with:)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/26/2017 5:19:00 AM

I believe we have a winner here! Your poem is such fun, the lust found within it is dominated by your word selection "gyrates," you even have an internal rhyme! What an exceptional write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this gem of a poem this morning! Great Work!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/26/2017 1:43:00 AM

Hi Andrea, What a good one-liner for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/26/2017 1:36:00 AM

:) Good one, Andrea...My favorite Disney character is Esmeralda...My alter ego. Hmmmmm. ;) Good write...loved it.