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'his Bow and Arrow'

roman god traverse daily
in search of receptive hearts 
using his bow and arrow
always missing mine  



Contest: Winged Cupid
1st Place

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Mary Blevins

April 20, 2011 at 9:09 PM

Congratulations, Wilma, I love your poem!

Judy Konos

March 23, 2011 at 10:28 PM

Depth.....thanks and congratulations

Michelle Mac Donald

March 21, 2011 at 6:46 PM

Oh that Cupid, Wilma, he might need glasses! Congratulations on your well deserved win. Thank you also, for your kind comments. Best to you, Mikki

Debbie Guzzi

March 21, 2011 at 1:03 PM

excellent write very GOOD last line! Congrad's on your fine win! Light & Love

George Aul

March 21, 2011 at 11:33 AM

Congrats on your first place win....George

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 21, 2011 at 10:53 AM

Congratulations to you Wilma for your 1st Place win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Winged Cupid". Love, Carol

Caryl Muzzey

March 21, 2011 at 8:11 AM

A wonderful winning entry, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your first place win. Caryl

Elaine George

March 21, 2011 at 7:34 AM

Wow! Wilma, I can see why this placed First. Many congrat's, Elaine

Harry Horsman

March 21, 2011 at 6:26 AM

Wonderful winner, Wilma, awesome. Harry

Kash Poet

March 21, 2011 at 12:50 AM

A super congrats on this super win Wilma--kash

Gwendolen Song

March 21, 2011 at 12:42 AM

Wilma! Great entry & win. Without the Roman gods, there would be no poetry! Gwendolen

Tahera Mannan

March 20, 2011 at 10:00 PM

Oh Poor Wilma. Only men fall with you upside dowm Eh? Many many congrats on this wonderful win.

John Freeman

March 20, 2011 at 8:56 PM

Good to see you at the top Wilma. Congratulations with this worthy honored first place. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

March 20, 2011 at 3:27 PM

Many congrats on your Number One : ) Jack

Carrie Richards

March 20, 2011 at 3:18 PM

Sad and melancholy is this sweet poem, but for sure a great winner! Congratulations, Wilma!!

Andrea Dietrich

March 20, 2011 at 3:15 PM

A BIG congratulations to you today, dear Wilma!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 20, 2011 at 3:12 PM

Congrats Wilma dear friend on your first place success in Cupid contest.. amazing words to thrill us all ..enjoy with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

March 20, 2011 at 3:06 PM

Big congratulations on taking first place in Dr. Ram's contest, Wilma! Well deserved. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

March 20, 2011 at 2:52 PM

A 1st place for the darling of soup...might have to compose a better email for this honor... love Michael...

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 20, 2011 at 2:36 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in my contest, Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 18, 2011 at 4:55 AM

AAWWEEE!!! Wilma .. how sweet .. how unique to end it the way u did .. very clever my friend.. so many can relate to luv.. good luck in the new contest.. happy weekend..

Andrea Dietrich

March 17, 2011 at 11:37 PM

coming back to this one. It is really good, Wilma.

Sara Kendrick

March 17, 2011 at 1:51 PM

Sorry that cupid misses your heart for I believe that you have so much love to give..Thanks for stopping by..I have written a new blog about my surgery...Sara