Lewis Raynes Poet Quatrain

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Sometimes, in a relationship, one person always has the talk to insult, while the other person is the dominant "doer" of things. Sometimes this imbalance leads to break ups. 

Debbie, I love you and this has nothing to do with you sweetheart. Love u always xxx.

His Actions Left With Him

He was always an action never shouting his thoughts, 
Always doing while she would just stare,
Watch, yell, insult on all that he did, 
Without ever leaving her chair,

To help or assist, to make the load light, 
Just watched him stand up for right,
Stand against bad, the corrupt and the shady, 
Then watching him fade out of sight.

Till, one day he left, just drove out of town, 
Sick of her comments of blame,
Never returning to the place where he once called home, 
Never returning to play her small game,

And his actions went with him to the place far away, 
They followed him out to his home,
And she wasn’t welcome she just sat on her chair,
To watch the cold wall all alone.

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