Kash Poet Poet Pantoum

Hip Hip Hurray-Debbie's Birthday

Debbie's birthday
Hip Hip Hurray,
all ku no play
National ku day!

Hip Hip Hurray
gift some haiku,
National ku day
I write,you too!

Gift some haiku
chocolate no more,
I write you too
one,two,three,four!

Chocolate no more
cake of haiku,
one,two,three,four
haiku in a queue!

Cake of haiku
mind your syllables,
haiku in a queue
how many candles?

Mind your syllables
not less not more,
how many candles
behind the back door:)

Not less not more
must be perfect,
behind the back door
dump all mistakes!

Must be perfect
all ku no play,
dump all mistakes
Debbie's birthday!!



© kash poet
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*Wish You a Very Very Happy Birthday Debi.


Placement:1st; (September  2012)

Contest: It's My Birthday

Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi

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Poet Destroyer A October 2, 2012 at 1:42 PM KASH, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD

Lee Ramage October 1, 2012 at 9:41 PM Oh, you are so smart... well done. Lee

Carol Sunshine Brown October 1, 2012 at 6:45 AM Congratulations on your win Kash. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud October 1, 2012 at 5:47 AM how delightfully funny, kashi.. super congrats on your win!.. :) huggs

Tahera Mannan September 30, 2012 at 10:55 PM Many congrats Kash for this win.

Bukang Liwayway September 30, 2012 at 10:11 PM BIG CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND KASH FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 30, 2012 at 1:46 PM Big congrats once again kash she deserves all of these lovely poems xx

Debbie Guzzi September 30, 2012 at 12:31 PM Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Mr. Kash ;) Light & Love

Lucilla Carrillo September 23, 2012 at 2:36 PM This is so sweet. I know she will like it. Is it going to the contest? Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Charles Henderson September 21, 2012 at 11:56 PM Nice string Kash, they are really hard to write.

Carrie Richards September 21, 2012 at 8:56 AM Oh, I hope Debbie saw this one! How clever!!

Debbie Duncan September 20, 2012 at 2:34 PM great write,,,, and bright blessings to Debbie,,, she explained to me how to write haiku ,,,, good luck on your win ;}

Black Eyed Susan September 20, 2012 at 11:34 AM great write, especially as a pantoum. they aren't easy! good luck in the contest :)

Bukang Liwayway September 20, 2012 at 9:49 AM wow!!! best birthday poem for debbie :) Good luck!

Jack Horne September 19, 2012 at 10:51 AM lol, love this witty write, Kash - I know Debbie will love it too : )

Nette Onclaud September 19, 2012 at 8:48 AM i got a greeat kick from this, kashi... debbie will surely enjoy your greeting!.. fabulous!!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2012 at 7:44 AM this is very very clever. I think she will LOVE it. I know I DO!!

Harry Horsman September 19, 2012 at 5:33 AM a wonderful poem Kash, and very deserving too!!!!!!!!!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2012 at 4:58 PM wow what a fabulous card for our birthday poet Kash .. a super treat of a write she will jump for joy .. good wishes for a big win but this one takes the cake luv ..

Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2012 at 2:47 PM Oh Yes,,, Debbie... hip hip horray... happy birthday DG.. this is wonderful of you... love your Libra Spirit..... xox~pd

Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2012 at 2:32 PM So sweet that you make a fuss on the birthdays "girl". I say HOORAY!! oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey September 18, 2012 at 1:27 PM She is a brilliant poet I must say Kashi! And this poem is quite the special write my friend! I love that you chose a Pantoum form to write your poem, she will like that too! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud September 18, 2012 at 1:20 PM awwwh, kashi... this one calls for a celebration!... such a winsome write!... winner!..:) huggs

Kash Poet September 18, 2012 at 1:06 PM She is my first haiku teacher here!