Hip Hip Hurray-Debbie's Birthday

Debbie's birthday Hip Hip Hurray, all ku no play National ku day! Hip Hip Hurray gift some haiku, National ku day I write,you too! Gift some haiku chocolate no more, I write you too one,two,three,four! Chocolate no more cake of haiku, one,two,three,four haiku in a queue! Cake of haiku mind your syllables, haiku in a queue how many candles? Mind your syllables not less not more, how many candles behind the back door:) Not less not more must be perfect, behind the back door dump all mistakes! Must be perfect all ku no play, dump all mistakes Debbie's birthday!! © kash poet ============000============= *Wish You a Very Very Happy Birthday Debi. Placement:1st; (September 2012) Contest: It's My Birthday Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi =============000=============

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Date: 10/2/2012 1:42:00 PM
KASH, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD
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Date: 10/1/2012 9:41:00 PM
Oh, you are so smart... well done. Lee
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2012 5:47:00 AM
how delightfully funny, kashi.. super congrats on your win!.. :) huggs
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:55:00 PM
Many congrats Kash for this win.
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:11:00 PM
BIG CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND KASH FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)
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Date: 9/30/2012 1:46:00 PM
Big congrats once again kash she deserves all of these lovely poems xx
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Date: 9/30/2012 12:31:00 PM
Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Mr. Kash ;) Light & Love
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Date: 9/23/2012 2:36:00 PM
This is so sweet. I know she will like it. Is it going to the contest? Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 9/21/2012 11:56:00 PM
Nice string Kash, they are really hard to write.
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Date: 9/21/2012 8:56:00 AM
Oh, I hope Debbie saw this one! How clever!!
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Date: 9/20/2012 2:34:00 PM
great write,,,, and bright blessings to Debbie,,, she explained to me how to write haiku ,,,, good luck on your win ;}
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Date: 9/20/2012 11:34:00 AM
great write, especially as a pantoum. they aren't easy! good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/20/2012 9:49:00 AM
wow!!! best birthday poem for debbie :) Good luck!
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Date: 9/19/2012 10:51:00 AM
lol, love this witty write, Kash - I know Debbie will love it too : )
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Date: 9/19/2012 8:48:00 AM
i got a greeat kick from this, kashi... debbie will surely enjoy your greeting!.. fabulous!!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/19/2012 7:44:00 AM
this is very very clever. I think she will LOVE it. I know I DO!!
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Date: 9/19/2012 5:33:00 AM
a wonderful poem Kash, and very deserving too!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 9/18/2012 4:58:00 PM
wow what a fabulous card for our birthday poet Kash .. a super treat of a write she will jump for joy .. good wishes for a big win but this one takes the cake luv ..
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Date: 9/18/2012 2:47:00 PM
Oh Yes,,, Debbie... hip hip horray... happy birthday DG.. this is wonderful of you... love your Libra Spirit..... xox~pd
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Date: 9/18/2012 2:32:00 PM
So sweet that you make a fuss on the birthdays "girl". I say HOORAY!! oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/18/2012 1:27:00 PM
She is a brilliant poet I must say Kashi! And this poem is quite the special write my friend! I love that you chose a Pantoum form to write your poem, she will like that too! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/18/2012 1:20:00 PM
awwwh, kashi... this one calls for a celebration!... such a winsome write!... winner!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/18/2012 1:06:00 PM
She is my first haiku teacher here!
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