Hip

How delicately you connect my whole physique,
The upper part and the lower half into one;
Leaving no organ to be unworkably weak,
Uniting the whole like the universe fine-spun...! 

Joining my legs and the trunk of my body well,
Fibers, tissues, nerves, bones, flesh, and blood together;
As a honeycomb combining each little cell,
You have bound the body like the wing and feather...!

Knit into, like thread in a loom or rods welded,
Two bones: the pelvis, and the thighbone or femur, 
Ilium, ischium, and pubis - well felted,
All beautifully set as though by a reamer...!

Like heaven and the Earth delicately unite,
O hip, you maintain my physique splendidly tight...!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 1:53 PM
Christuraj, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge H Words !
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 3:44 PM
what a lovely tribute to the hip lol:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write. Have a blessed/great day.................
Alex Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 9:35 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Poet Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Alex, heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest.
Alex Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 9:36 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 5:53 AM
- A "hip" poem ... congratulations on your win in the contest, Alex :) - ("hip" means "top" in Norwegian) - hugs
Alex Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 9:36 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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