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Hints of Blue

The shape of me Constantly changing New forms expressed Facets exposed The curves of me angled Polished Exposed Look deep See the inner me I do not wish to hide this is where my soul resides Yes there are flaws Exposed by the light Yet within the complexity There is more to see I am a reflection of you Expressed in colors true The shape is changing Rearranging You polish You cut Reveal Help me feel Changing along with all of you Pockets of diamonds Multi colored with hints of blue

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Irfana Ali Bhat

Date: 4/11/2013 12:39:00 PM

this is a beauty, Richard...:))

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2013 8:42:00 PM

Hi Irfana so nice to have you visit.

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 4/11/2013 10:08:00 AM

Lovely Rick, I just read this one today and and I love how it's written :) you always know how to make a simple muse become something worth to be read :) hug, Yanny

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2013 8:44:00 PM

You are a wonderful muse, far from simple, delightful would be a more apt description.

Bernard Colasurdo

Date: 4/8/2013 10:00:00 PM

Loved reading this Rick, there are many "facets" to this gem for sure. Had to read it a few times and each time I understood more. great write my friend

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2013 8:08:00 AM

Hi Bernard thanks for the visit.

Donna Jones

Date: 4/8/2013 4:06:00 PM

Yes Richard..expressed in colors true...you write wonderful

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2013 6:08:00 PM

Thanks Donna, I am so glad you enjoy my writing.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2013 3:25:00 PM

this is very nice free verse and even has hints of rhyme in it I think. Were the hints of blue for occasional melancholy that we all can get?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2013 6:07:00 PM

I am becoming fond of this style, there is a certain freedom with it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2013 3:25:00 PM

also, thanks for your sweet comment the other day.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2013 6:06:00 PM

You are welcome Andrea, you deserve it.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/8/2013 9:17:00 AM

Very beautifully expressed! :) Is the hint of blue a reflection of the color of your eyes? Just teasing...Becca is right. You do reflect what others write and inspire others as well. Great write.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2013 6:05:00 PM

Hi Eileen busy day so havn't had time to respond. Thanks for the nice comment.

David Williams

Date: 4/8/2013 8:47:00 AM

Richard I like this, ever changing never stagnant ....David

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2013 9:04:00 AM

Thanks David