Richard Lamoureux Poet Free verse

Hints of Blue

The shape of me
Constantly changing 
New forms expressed
Facets exposed
The curves of me angled
Polished
Exposed
Look deep
See the inner me
I do not wish to hide
this is where my soul resides
Yes there are flaws
Exposed by the light
Yet within the complexity
There is more to see
I am a reflection of you
Expressed in colors true
The shape is changing
Rearranging 
You polish
You cut
Reveal
Help me feel
Changing along with all of you
Pockets of diamonds
Multi colored with hints of blue

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Irfana Ali Bhat April 11, 2013 at 12:39 PM this is a beauty, Richard...:)) Richard Lamoureux April 11, 2013 at 8:42 PM Hi Irfana so nice to have you visit.

Yanny Widjanarko April 11, 2013 at 10:08 AM Lovely Rick, I just read this one today and and I love how it's written :) you always know how to make a simple muse become something worth to be read :) hug, Yanny Richard Lamoureux April 11, 2013 at 8:44 PM You are a wonderful muse, far from simple, delightful would be a more apt description.

Bernard Colasurdo April 8, 2013 at 10:00 PM Loved reading this Rick, there are many "facets" to this gem for sure. Had to read it a few times and each time I understood more. great write my friend Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2013 at 8:08 AM Hi Bernard thanks for the visit.

Donna Jones April 8, 2013 at 4:06 PM Yes Richard..expressed in colors true...you write wonderful Richard Lamoureux April 8, 2013 at 6:08 PM Thanks Donna, I am so glad you enjoy my writing.

Andrea Dietrich April 8, 2013 at 3:25 PM also, thanks for your sweet comment the other day. Richard Lamoureux April 8, 2013 at 6:06 PM You are welcome Andrea, you deserve it.

Andrea Dietrich April 8, 2013 at 3:25 PM this is very nice free verse and even has hints of rhyme in it I think. Were the hints of blue for occasional melancholy that we all can get? Richard Lamoureux April 8, 2013 at 6:07 PM I am becoming fond of this style, there is a certain freedom with it.

Eileen Manassian April 8, 2013 at 9:17 AM Very beautifully expressed! :) Is the hint of blue a reflection of the color of your eyes? Just teasing...Becca is right. You do reflect what others write and inspire others as well. Great write. Richard Lamoureux April 8, 2013 at 6:05 PM Hi Eileen busy day so havn't had time to respond. Thanks for the nice comment.

David Williams April 8, 2013 at 8:47 AM Richard I like this, ever changing never stagnant ....David Richard Lamoureux April 8, 2013 at 9:04 AM Thanks David