Him

I feel him everywhere
He's my savior and loving prayer

Let me tell you he's mighty fine

Smiling eyes to see me through
In everything I choose to do

The very best of humankind

My very soul my dream come true
Never loved anyone like I love you

God knows I thank him all the time

I feel him everywhere
Angels sent him I'm aware

I will love him till the end of time

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Date: 1/8/2018 9:08:00 AM
I seen to be drawn back to this one again. A refreshing read.
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Date: 5/25/2017 4:41:00 AM
Very passionate; nicely done -JT
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Carol B.
Date: 11/10/2017 7:31:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 12/28/2016 8:58:00 AM
Beautiful verse. (: A sweet dedication to a loved one in your life. Precious piece. A 7 for beauty and uniqueness.
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Carol B.
Date: 1/14/2017 3:31:00 PM
Thank you so much for the nice comment. This comment made my day!
Date: 11/7/2016 3:27:00 AM
Beautiful write Carol...
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Date: 11/4/2016 8:10:00 AM
Good morning.
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Date: 10/31/2016 8:29:00 AM
Well worth another read. Have a wonderful week.
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Carol B.
Date: 11/2/2016 11:54:00 AM
Richard, Thank you so much for this huge compliment. Have a wonderful week as well. :)
Date: 10/30/2016 11:50:00 PM
This is beautiful Carol. It is so comforting to know there is someone you can always count on in time of need. ; ) 7
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Carol B.
Date: 11/2/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thanks so much for your beautiful comment.
Date: 10/30/2016 5:36:00 PM
wonderful passion for Christ, Carol!!
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Carol B.
Date: 11/2/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 10/30/2016 2:01:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Carol - Enjoy reading it this evening :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol B.
Date: 10/30/2016 2:43:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise :) Wishing you a great evening as well.
Date: 10/30/2016 3:54:00 AM
A loving testimony, Carol. Beautifully written and expressed. I share the same sentiments. Much love and more love to you and yours.
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Carol B.
Date: 10/30/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thanks Freddie :)
Date: 10/29/2016 8:45:00 AM
Just excellent. A beautiful relationship declared and sung. A Fav.
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Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:54:00 PM
It's the most precious gift and I cherish him. I count my lucky stars everyday!
Date: 10/29/2016 6:29:00 AM
This is lovely... it will make a great song.
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Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:51:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 10/29/2016 6:19:00 AM
Such devotion, Carol. Lovely!
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Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:48:00 PM
Thanks Daniel :)
Date: 10/29/2016 2:51:00 AM
Wow some lucky guy.If its for God , He will be gratefull too God bless
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Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:47:00 PM
I'm the lucky one :)
Date: 10/28/2016 7:44:00 PM
Now this is a Love beyond compare. Amen!
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Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:47:00 PM
So very true :)
Date: 10/28/2016 5:03:00 PM
Hi Carol, This is beautiful. Your love for God shines bright in this piece:-) Alexis
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Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:45:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment :)
Date: 10/28/2016 4:16:00 PM
Very nice!
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Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:44:00 PM
Thank you:)
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