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Him

This "Him-ness" feeling that rumbles inside every time I look into his eyes That throb when he smiles at me And I feel all brightened up And safe This feeling of caring deep inside The miss and longing When he is Far The Dread when I see him walk Away He's gone ! The quiet cry for Him At night The steady wish for his Good for his happiness He is happy Elsewhere And my heart expands ... Is this love?

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Date: 3/26/2016 6:22:00 AM
Congrat.I enjoyed ~This feeling of caring~, poem and horizon of question in which we try to live with fidelity to our wishful thinking.
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Ren Yanai
Date: 3/26/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind words Ovidiu! Best, Ren

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