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my beauty my strength through my lips and through my veins you broke my heart i killed my brain and to this day you still remain my love my life my heart that KNIFE by cortney stone

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Milton Toran

Date: 9/13/2009 8:58:00 AM

Trust me, I'm well familiar with a broken heart. So I can truly relate to this piece. Short, powerful, and to the point. Congratulations! ~Milt~

Jayne Eggins

Date: 9/11/2009 9:20:00 PM

Powerful write this one ... congrates on being featured this week ...kind regards Jayne :)

P Sheart

Date: 9/11/2009 4:52:00 PM

Hi Cortney Congrats on this heartfelt feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patricia

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/11/2009 9:37:00 AM

So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/11/2009 5:52:00 AM

This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/8/2009 5:39:00 PM

Cortney - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj