Him

my beauty my strength through my lips 
and through my veins you broke my heart 
i killed my brain and to this day you still 
remain my love my life my heart that 
                  KNIFE



                               by cortney stone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Toran Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 8:58 AM
Trust me, I'm well familiar with a broken heart. So I can truly relate to this piece. Short, powerful, and to the point. Congratulations! ~Milt~
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September 11, 2009 at 9:20 PM
Powerful write this one ... congrates on being featured this week ...kind regards Jayne :)
Sheart Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 4:52 PM
Hi Cortney Congrats on this heartfelt feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patricia
Rider Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 9:37 AM
So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
Adeite Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 5:52 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
Jordan Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 5:39 PM
Cortney - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
Moreno Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Cortney, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
Fraser Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 3:17 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Cortney. Love, Carol
Loving Iii Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 7:04 PM
afraid to ask. jhl
Omololu Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 6:19 AM
hello and welcome. i suggest you read through forms/type of poetry.i had same problems choosing a form! but this is a nice piece!goodwork
Brown Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 4:50 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Cortney.Wishing you the best in your writing and in life. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 6:50 PM
Poignant and so true, welcome to poetry soup, I hope you enjoy your stay...Raul
Lopez Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 6:47 PM
A heartfelt poem, looks like your new here to the soup .....welcome!
Loveless Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 5:28 PM
this is a strong emotional poem...very nice write.
Fraser Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 3:55 PM
Powerful emotions in this poem Cortney>>James
Culverhouse Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 3:32 PM
very sad, good writing though
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