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Hillbillies Silly Wedding

Ten hillbillies came over the hill
Each one of them answered to Bill
To name them all Billy
Would be rather silly
Not one of them responds to Will

Their fiancés all share the name Sue
Mass confusion, causes such a to do
They'd arranged a joint wedding
To the alter they’re heading
Ten hillbillies had not thought it through

Their intentions were very well meant
One invitation covered the event
The whole town was invited
And they were delighted
To witness nuptials in a huge tent

The excitement it grew and grew
As each Bill married his Sue
They all walked down the aisle
Echo pair with a huge smile
singing Abba's I do I do I do

Hillbillies, Bybillies, and Blowbilllies. - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger  

4/14/18

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2018

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Lyric Man Date: 5/15/2018 12:17:00 PM Jan, It's hard to beat a good old fashioned hillbilly wedding.. your playful write captures the essence well. And I'm a big Abba fan to boot! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/15/2018 12:24:00 PM Thanks Chance I am sure you could write a beautiful love song for the hillibillies wedding:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/10/2018 6:26:00 PM This is FANTASTIC , Jan. Gosh dang!! It's a winner with me anyway. It's very clever, sweetie! I don't know how this one ever got past me. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/10/2018 6:31:00 PM I didn't mention bybillies or blowbillies so guess that's the reason it didn't place, but it wasn't in the rules we had to use them and as they were made up words but I'm happy the poem has veen so well received:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings Date: 4/18/2018 9:02:00 PM I'm reading this with brother, Billy and we both enjoyed this. He called it 'cute' and not one word about his name in your limerick. Truly a great limerick in perfect Jan-style. This is a winner with no need of a contest. Make sure it gets in the book. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/10/2018 6:26:00 PM yes, Caycay is right. This one in the book as well! Jan Allison Date: 4/19/2018 4:14:00 AM oh I'm so glad you and your brother enjoyed my silly rhyme:-) poetry hugs to you all:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/16/2018 5:26:00 PM :) Delightfully upbeat and humorous, Jan. I was wondering what type of poems Caren was seeking. Perhaps this is it! Best wishes in her contest. Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/16/2018 5:29:00 PM I think the title for the contest is confusing people and I had to mail to discover two of the words are made up ( I thought they may be local words as i couldn't find them on google) I hope Caren likes my take on the contest idea:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 4/16/2018 10:52:00 AM This one really had me laughing! A true-to-character piece with so much wit and creativity! What an enjoyable read! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/16/2018 10:58:00 AM Thanks so much Pandita:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 4/15/2018 9:26:00 PM Excellent Jan, like always outshine :) luck in the contest Hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/16/2018 1:05:00 AM Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne Date: 4/15/2018 3:02:00 PM LOL, great fun, as ever Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/15/2018 3:04:00 PM Cheers my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams Date: 4/15/2018 2:13:00 PM Much more than confusing contest title. I'm not at all sure what was expected but never the less, you've got a masterpiece here. Really funny Jan, and I've always loved ABBA!!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/15/2018 2:18:00 PM The title confused me but I found out that two of the words are made up so I just went with the one that did make sense to me:-) Abba music is timeless:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley Date: 4/14/2018 7:09:00 PM Lol! Such a fun and fabulous limerick, Jan. Enjoyed you excellent theme and rhymes! Best wishes for a win.. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2018 7:11:00 PM Thanks Susan I wasn't sure what to write about as I found the title of the contest rather confusing but I just did the best I could:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier Date: 4/14/2018 5:04:00 PM Jolly festivities, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2018 5:05:00 PM Thanks Line:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/14/2018 3:20:00 PM Ahhh! So fun <3 Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2018 3:26:00 PM Cheers Mo. i wrote this one the other day for the contest and the pile cream one last night and I couldn't decide which to post so posted them both lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/14/2018 1:46:00 PM - ... I do ... I do ... I do ... love it too :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2018 1:57:00 PM Oh Abba were awesome their music is timeless:-)have a wonderful weekend:-) hugs jan xx

Christopher Goss Date: 4/14/2018 1:00:00 PM I love it. Great poem. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2018 1:03:00 PM Thanks Christopher I was inspired by the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/14/2018 9:45:00 AM haha. brilliant jan, that pic reminds me of the film deliverance. Good luck in the contest. Tom. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/14/2018 9:47:00 AM Thanks Tom, i just can't stop the limericks flowing...I was toying with posting the song shotgun wedding to go with the pic lol. The poem i am currently writing is so so different for me. I'll be interested to see what people think of it:-) have a lovely day:-) hugs jan xx