Hill

Beyond an old hill
            is a new one to be climbed
    ~walk safe and slowly~

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Darlene De Beaulieu

September 21, 2023 at 3:52 PM

Hello Maria, this is a beautiful poem. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 23, 2023 at 10:20 AM

Hello Maria, you are welcome my friend. enoy your day. Hugs. /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

September 21, 2023 at 3:59 PM

Thank you my love, my friend

David William Breidenthal

September 20, 2023 at 2:01 AM

Beautifully written :) such a lovely poem and a haiku full of nature so benevolent

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

September 20, 2023 at 2:10 AM

Hello J.W. Thank you so much for your lovely words. Have a nice day...!

Bill Baker

September 19, 2023 at 3:53 PM

Your Haiku was a perfect match with the photo, Maria. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, my friend. Have a pleasant week. Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

September 19, 2023 at 4:20 PM

Hello Bill. Thank you so muchxxxx

Christina Bowring

September 17, 2023 at 3:33 PM

Dear Maria this is a great haiku alongside the picture. Great choice of carefully chosen words. Very clever. So enjoyed it. Have a great week dear friend. Hugs and smiles :):) xx

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

September 17, 2023 at 4:42 PM

My dear Christina. Thank you with all my heart for reading again. I will read carefully your new one. Have a beautuful week too..Hugs..