Hiku: two friends in love

life feels so e a s y
when two true friends
 
                                        f

                                             a

 .                                                l

                                                         l 

                                                        in love~
                    d  e  l  i  g  h  t   all the  w   a   y


no time  for   h ~ a ~ t ~ r ~ e ~ d
since true friendship harbors 
                                  l  o  v  e ~
peace of m
                        i
                             n
                                   d
                                         s always






Contest: YOUR CHOICE p
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Contest Judged:May 28th, 2025 9:38:00 PM
Placement: First
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Empress Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 11:22 PM
Awwn thats a beautiful thought youv expressed in the form of hiku! Yes life is delightful when its filled with nothing but love, hate a distant memory! Peace all the way! Pleasure reading your hiku! Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light! Keep sharing them hikus
Famuyiwa Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 2:05 AM
I am really elated reading this your encouraging comment. Thanks so much.
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 11:15 PM
Oh I see it's a double haiku set. Very nice!
Famuyiwa Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 12:11 AM
Yes. Thanks.
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