Hiku Tears

a summer morning- at the crematorium tears dry on the breeze repost from 2010

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Date: 9/26/2021 11:22:00 AM

Hello Brian Strand, yes it is sad when a person passes. A stressful time. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2021 11:04:00 AM

Hello Brian Strand, I am happy to hear it. Cheers! Brian.

Brian Strand
Date: 9/27/2021 12:54:00 AM

Cheers Darlene,hiku so appropriate for imagery

Date: 9/26/2021 10:04:00 AM

Very touching, and as Harry says, relevent today as well. I recently learned of camps being built with crematoriums. Very disturbing news.

Brian Strand
Date: 9/27/2021 12:53:00 AM

Necessity Andrea,in an explosive pop growth. we now have

Date: 9/26/2021 9:46:00 AM

Your portrait of grief touches the heart. Well written.

Brian Strand
Date: 9/27/2021 12:52:00 AM

Cheers Evelyn,a. fav form for imagery

Date: 9/26/2021 8:28:00 AM

Still ever so relevant today, Brian. love it.

Brian Strand
Date: 9/27/2021 12:50:00 AM

In deed so Harry

Date: 9/26/2021 7:13:00 AM

Very emotional piece here. Great job. Well done my friend. God Bless, JB

Brian Strand
Date: 9/27/2021 12:50:00 AM

Hiku are ideal for thee Judy

Date: 9/26/2021 1:09:00 AM

Poignant and very atmospheric (not sure if that's the right word but I'm using it.) Tears are a gift. Cheers - Gary

Brian Strand
Date: 9/27/2021 12:49:00 AM

Yes,an emotional outlet Gary