Hiku - Jedi at Ten

f o r c e 
              f i e l d
                            d i m
                                      the
                                             l i g h t s
g l o w
            b a l l s
                         like
                                 l a s e r s
                                                  in
                                                       f l i g h t

r e f l e c t i on 
                                O
                                N
                                                      s c r e e n

            dangerous tango and duel
sky walker and grand Vader
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DiMino Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 6:56 AM
I can hear the galactic sizzle. Well done. Don't know much about form...but this method seems to require a lot of poetic dedication. Nicely done.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 11:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 2:14 AM
I agree with Anne. This is very creative. You have a knack for these types of poems.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 4:43 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Wolf Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 9:06 PM
A poet AND an artist you are!! ~ gwe
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 4:43 AM
Thank you :)
Andresen Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 6:44 AM
- Creative poem, Kim - Well done :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 8:08 AM
Thank you! xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 5:35 PM
Cool formatting. Are you a Star Wars fan?
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 5:50 PM
I enjoyed the original trilogy! :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 11:53 AM
Very creative Kim, may the force be with you.. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 3:14 PM
LOL…thanks, Tom!
Hind Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 11:17 AM
Wow, this is pretty cool- love the "tango and duel"
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 11:21 AM
Thank you, my friend!
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