Hiku For You

spring showers today how green my memories- ah, I live again Posted 2010

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2021 4:45:00 PM

absolutely love this one.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/15/2021 6:34:00 PM

"how green my memories" I have never thought about it in that way. Brian, this is so beautiful and uplifting. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy

Brian Strand
Date: 9/16/2021 12:43:00 AM

Ah yes Brandy..it had its intended impact..thats good to hear

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/15/2021 12:17:00 PM

Hello Brian Strand, Beautifully done. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/16/2021 6:46:00 AM

Hello Brain, yes everyone is a new one. Enjoy your day my friend.

Brian Strand
Date: 9/16/2021 12:40:00 AM

Everyone ..a new one Darlene

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2021 4:32:00 AM

I really like this one. We do have those green memories in the early spring don't we. Alas! We are headed for winter where the skeletal outlines dominate the scene but so much can be seen that we miss in spring and summer. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate your kind reviews of my work. Sara

Brian Strand
Date: 9/16/2021 12:41:00 AM

Yes Sara nature compliment us & ica versa s part of His design