Maclawrence Famuyiwa Poet Haiku

Hiku: come closer

please C
                 O
                      M
                            E  closer
your  l*o*v*e  I  desire~
all s~e~a~
                      s
                          o
                               n
                                    s

k~i~s~s  my  l~i~p~s ~
my sorrow will be O
                                 V
                                 E
                                 R
                              best l~o~v~e










Contest title: 1391
Contest Judged:  June 21st, 2025 9:27:00 PM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Placement: First

Contest title: Shaped Haiku
Contest Judged:  July 1st, 2025 6:13:00 PM
Sponsored by: JCB Brul
Placement: Second

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thriveni c mysore July 2, 2025 at 7:05 PM Nice write. creative. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!! Maclawrence Famuyiwa July 2, 2025 at 10:00 PM Thanks Thriveni.

Linda Alice Fowler July 2, 2025 at 7:28 AM Very romantic Maclawrence. Keep 'em coming! Congratulations! :) Maclawrence Famuyiwa July 2, 2025 at 4:31 PM Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2025 at 11:57 PM And another win. Well done Maclawrence Famuyiwa July 2, 2025 at 2:48 AM Thanks Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2025 at 12:02 PM Big congrats on your win Maclawrence Famuyiwa June 22, 2025 at 12:51 PM Thanks as usual Andrea.