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Hiku cattle bells ringing

Cattle bells ringing u n o d somewhere beyond termite m s— flies h u m in the heat

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 5/21/2025 5:58:00 AM

Ahh atmospheric and fun, brilliant combination! Love these hybrid shape hiku poems - this looks a surefire winner :)

Ink Empress

Date: 5/21/2025 3:11:00 AM

This is beautiful sis! I wish i knew how to arrange words, like its going in circles! Thats so artistic and clever of you and you chose to write on something so different! I can hear those cattle bells ringing! Such a picturesque hiku, well delivered! I see its also a top winner! So congrats! Well deserved! Hope to read more of your poems! Fave this is! Sending you light always

Lin Lane

Date: 5/20/2025 3:06:00 AM

Hi Billie... you may know that I'm not a fan of this form and don't usually read them, but I have to applaud this one. It's not like trying to read something while on a roller coaster ride. It's just subtle enough in words and form for me to get what those mounds really are. ;-)

Billie Jama
Date: 5/20/2025 3:17:00 AM

I'm so glad you're understood and enjoyed. Much appreciated.