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Hiku cattle bells ringing

Cattle bells ringing
                                                u   n
                                               o           d
somewhere beyond termite m                 s—
flies h u m in the heat

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Ink Empress

May 21, 2025 at 3:11 AM

This is beautiful sis! I wish i knew how to arrange words, like its going in circles! Thats so artistic and clever of you and you chose to write on something so different! I can hear those cattle bells ringing! Such a picturesque hiku, well delivered! I see its also a top winner! So congrats! Well deserved! Hope to read more of your poems! Fave this is! Sending you light always

Lin Lane

May 20, 2025 at 3:06 AM

Hi Billie... you may know that I'm not a fan of this form and don't usually read them, but I have to applaud this one. It's not like trying to read something while on a roller coaster ride. It's just subtle enough in words and form for me to get what those mounds really are. ;-)

Billie Jama

May 20, 2025 at 3:17 AM

I'm so glad you're understood and enjoyed. Much appreciated.

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