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Hiku 6

frozen front hidden cave amid rocks ~ icicle tears 16th May 2023

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Date: 5/19/2023 3:42:00 AM
This one feels very sad. I see your creativeness within the lines. Thanks for sharing this winner with us. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 5/19/2023 2:13:00 AM
" icicle tears" - Beautiful. Speaks volumes. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/16/2023 12:35:00 PM
yes, they do look like giant tears!!!
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Date: 5/16/2023 11:58:00 AM
Best word to describe this haiku is that it is splendidly written.
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Date: 5/16/2023 8:55:00 AM
Hi Jo, You penned such vivid imagery in a few words. Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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