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hiku 19

dawn breeze sunrise surprise ~ prancing peacock

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Date: 5/26/2025 8:18:00 PM
Congrats in my contest. I liked the assonance in the middle line and the alliteration in last two lines. So cute
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Date: 5/13/2025 1:37:00 AM
Oh, another peacock write, must be peacock day for me. I like this imagery, sunrise prances like a peacock. Cool and creative, Jo ... CayCay
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Date: 5/7/2025 9:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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