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Hiku 15

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22nd October 2023 (For Brian's "No 1252 New poem" contest)


crescent moon smiles
tangerine sun's cheerio ~
crepuscule romance

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/23/2024 6:25:00 PM

Love at first sight, perhaps... Your words conjure such wonderful images, Joanna. So well done :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/25/2023 7:45:00 AM

Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/18/2023 12:06:00 PM

Lovely haiku Jo. Love the "...sun's cheerio..." :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2023 1:24:00 AM

Romance to the core. A wonderful poem. Blessings

Bill Baker

Date: 11/11/2023 8:41:00 PM

I like your chances in the contest with this fine Haiku, Jo. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Gary Radice

Date: 11/7/2023 10:57:00 PM

Joanna, I've learnt another word for twilight today: "crepescule" - Great work..but Hiku (Haiku?) number 15?? I have 14 to catch up on. :) Cheers - Gary

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/6/2023 5:58:00 PM

Such a romantic poem written for your heart. Lovely imagery dear Jo. :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/23/2023 5:54:00 AM

Oh I simply love the personification done here, effortless and magical! Where the crescent moon smiles.. Woww.. A brilliant haiku with so much imagery & eloquence.. Well done! "Tangerine sun" Oh, very creative.. Enjoyed reading this :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/23/2023 2:09:00 AM

Romance at the best time of the day. Lovely imagery. Blessings.