Hiku 15


crescent moon smiles
tangerine sun's cheerio ~
crepuscule romance

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Kelly Deschler

January 23, 2024 at 6:25 PM

Love at first sight, perhaps... Your words conjure such wonderful images, Joanna. So well done :)

Jennifer Proxenos

November 25, 2023 at 7:45 AM

Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.

Linda Alice Fowler

November 18, 2023 at 12:06 PM

Lovely haiku Jo. Love the "...sun's cheerio..." :)

Victor Buhagiar

November 13, 2023 at 1:24 AM

Romance to the core. A wonderful poem. Blessings

Bill Baker

November 11, 2023 at 8:41 PM

I like your chances in the contest with this fine Haiku, Jo. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Gary Radice

November 7, 2023 at 10:57 PM

Joanna, I've learnt another word for twilight today: "crepescule" - Great work..but Hiku (Haiku?) number 15?? I have 14 to catch up on. :) Cheers - Gary

Linda Alice Fowler

November 6, 2023 at 5:58 PM

Such a romantic poem written for your heart. Lovely imagery dear Jo. :)

Hiya Sharma

October 23, 2023 at 5:54 AM

Oh I simply love the personification done here, effortless and magical! Where the crescent moon smiles.. Woww.. A brilliant haiku with so much imagery & eloquence.. Well done! "Tangerine sun" Oh, very creative.. Enjoyed reading this :)