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Hiking In the Universe

HIKING IN THE UNIVERSE We hiked to Geo-City, deep in the forest.... And found treasures of sparkling geodes, Appearing like magic! ....then, climbing, brought Them to their rightful place in the universe, At the foot of the mammoth Eagles Nest... Where the Eagle sleeps, where I dream......

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Matthew Anish

Date: 8/5/2009 8:47:00 PM

Sounds like a great hike. Geodes are beautiful. Yours Matthew Anish

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2009 4:26:00 AM

Good Morning Jim. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Love, Carol

Patti Masterman

Date: 8/3/2009 8:20:00 PM

I love to write poems about true things. This is a beautiful story. Thank you for commenting on my first poem here. It made me feel very welcome. cheers Patti

Corinne Curcio

Date: 8/3/2009 9:40:00 AM

How wonderful. I like the idea of being the only one who knows about treasures. I feel that way when I sit on my balcony on the 14th floor, or in my little bit of woods, and see a rainbow, or a Peregrine Falcon fly by, and think that no one else sees this but me. Again, well done Jim.

Krista Kurth

Date: 8/3/2009 7:17:00 AM

James, I love this poem. So evocative and magical - and then to find out it's real - wow! Thanks for all your encouraging comments on my poems. I am learning so much from all my new friends in this poetry soup community. All the best, Krista

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/3/2009 6:16:00 AM

I love the title to this piece my friend..wonderful writing again.

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/2/2009 10:39:00 PM

I bet that view is spectacular too James, I too am a hiker, I love to run the trails and stop to breathe in the fresh air while appreciating the sounds and sights of nature. EXCELLENT!!!!!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/2/2009 9:41:00 PM

LOvely, lovely..and exciting too. Wish I had been there. BG