Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

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High Yellow High

HIGH YELLOW HIGH

Fire
above
soaked
under
golden sun
dancing
in
sound vim
of bright skies
and tender breeze 
then taste some
under
the
tuscan
suns, good times
warming
joy
freshness
high!
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***Waltz Wave with syllables count
***UNDER THE TUSCAN SUN - happiness in a glass. It's a mixed drink: flavored grapes and orange juice.

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***Sponsor	Kim Merryman
Contest Name	Waltzing with Color 
~~6th Place~~

O.E. Guillermo
12:45 PM, JULY 03, 2015

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Peter Lewis Holmes July 24, 2015 at 4:21 AM A bright bouncy write Olive!...and thanks for your comments.. I decided to change the line...best wishes Peter

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM Olive, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Sara Kendrick July 20, 2015 at 4:21 PM The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2015 at 3:46 PM Just saw your message to me. Yes, I have done here alreayd violet, blue, yellow, white. Maybe it's only black I never did. I may have done red, but I picked orange because that is a color I knew I had not done. BIG congrats on your win here. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 5, 2015 at 9:30 AM thanks much Andie.. =`) weeeee!

Skat A July 19, 2015 at 3:26 PM OLIVE, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 24, 2015 at 8:51 AM thank you Skat. :D

Jan Allison July 19, 2015 at 5:22 AM such a happyl write Olive many congrats:-) hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 24, 2015 at 8:42 AM congratz too JAn.. :D!thanks.. =')

Lee Carter July 19, 2015 at 12:04 AM Fun happy yellow poem! Congrats on your win olive! ~lee

Lee Carter July 18, 2015 at 11:56 PM Fun happy yellow poem! Congrats on your win olive! ~lee Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 24, 2015 at 8:38 AM Thank you so much Lee.. :)~

Kim Merryman July 18, 2015 at 11:51 PM Olive, your poem reflects the happy cheerfulness of yellow. Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 24, 2015 at 8:36 AM Thank you so much Kim for the placement.. :D!

Matthew Anish July 7, 2015 at 9:12 PM What a joyous piece of work! P3eace & Love Matthew Anish Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 9, 2015 at 12:36 AM Thank you so much Matthew.. I want such be radiated and felt within my poem! =") As this also the personality I maintain.. =")!

Paul Callus July 6, 2015 at 10:26 AM Lovely! A wave of mellow and joyful feelings under the Tuscan sun. Delightful imagery. gl in the contest Olive_eloi:) hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 9, 2015 at 12:34 AM Paul, Yellow is a bright happy color..when I made this one I wasn't thinking not only of the color but me also... I put myself in the poem as see I always try to be also happy.. well not bright as yellow but I do have my own light! =")~Olive Eloisa

James Fraser July 4, 2015 at 1:58 PM Love this Olive, and it's making me so thirsty. Flavoured Grapes and Orange, mmm, yummy, nice xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 8, 2015 at 9:03 AM Yes taste it..! =")

Emile Pinet July 3, 2015 at 5:18 PM This poem comes alive with color so well imposed by the superb imagery. Emile. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 8, 2015 at 9:00 AM WEEE i need to stAy on that Emile.. =") I love imagery!!!

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2015 at 1:47 PM awesome poem for an awesome color. If I had not already done a yellow poem, I'd have chosen this color, but orange is a color I have never written on, so I have an orange poem waiting in the wings for this contest.Good luck with yours, I know it will do well. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 6, 2015 at 7:30 AM Thank you so much Andie.. =)! Another try .. !!! I am choosing between blue and yellow... I have a poem already with color blue hence I chose yellow.. :D!

Nette Onclaud July 3, 2015 at 9:49 AM enjoyed the feel-good mood of this one, eloi... keep the spirit; lovely.. saan ka na?.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2015 at 12:11 AM still here in Phil Nette, I'll contact you soon for a meeting.. =) Hope you are free.. =)! weeeee thanks much on your comment!! ~Olive Eloisa

Peter Lewis Holmes July 3, 2015 at 6:49 AM Nice write Olive and thanks for the comment...Peter Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2015 at 12:10 AM welcome Peter.. Your poem caught my eye.. =0! Happy Sunday! ~Olive Eloisa =)!

Milton Robertson July 3, 2015 at 6:26 AM I don't know how to waltz but I like the poem. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2015 at 12:07 AM Thank much Milton, this my second try on this form.. =) what I like about the form is that it challenges me and stimulates my attention in choosing write words.. Allowing every word strikes as much as possible.. Not wasting a syllable.. :D!

Sara Kendrick July 3, 2015 at 5:23 AM Wow!! I haven't heard of this one..I don't know if I could try it or not for I might get dizzy..LOL..Thanks for dropping by..I desire to go to the peach packing shed today..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 4, 2015 at 8:44 AM Thanks much Sara.. I appreciate you dropping by.. =)! weeee that will be enjoyable I love to have such experience also.. ;)!

Njeri Hunjeri July 3, 2015 at 4:15 AM High yellow high!!!! Your poem just brightened my day. Good luck in the contest Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 4, 2015 at 8:42 AM Thanks much Njeri... =)!

Kp Nunez July 3, 2015 at 3:44 AM A waltzing wave of words, a wonderfully woven work that wow the woman in wuv! ehe...in love...whose name is Olive! You went out to the world, my dear kabayan! hugs! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 8:01 AM Kim, thanks much!!! :D! weeeeeee hugs back too! :D!

Skat A July 3, 2015 at 1:34 AM Love the high. :) Olive... it's so bright.. enjoyed reading your poem tonight **SKAT** Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 3:38 AM Hi Skat, I thank you for dropping a comment.. I tried my best let the color yellow appear as much in the poem.. though hard because the syllables are limited.. but I Like it.. I hope the reader will see and feel the liveliness of the color~ ~Olive Eloisa =)