Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

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Jill, the one who came tumbling after - never again.

Jill Nursery Rhyme

Sponsor: Charles Messina

 

 

High upon a Hill

Jill was high upon a hill,
looking fit and rather so.
Kingdom phat and muscles toned,
to wind released her bonnet.

Without the doofus Jack,
there’s not one thing Jill lacks.
No bruised knees nor broken crown.
A bluebird’s singing sonnet.

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Andrea Dietrich November 22, 2024 at 11:34 AM So cute, Kim. Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith November 18, 2024 at 12:48 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write/story. Jill, watch out for the hills... Have a fun day with your win as you write away.................. Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2024 at 1:01 PM Thank you, Paula!

Charles Messina November 18, 2024 at 2:40 AM A fun read and write, Kim. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie :) Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2024 at 9:05 AM Thank you, Charlie! Had fun writing for it!

David Crandall November 2, 2024 at 9:03 PM Good one Kim! Jack's overrated. Kim Rodrigues November 3, 2024 at 3:45 AM Thank you, David! Jack’s descent was indeed calamitous. Rather Jill show wisdom :)

Janice Canerdy October 31, 2024 at 5:28 AM And Jack watches from afar and sighs! Good one, Kim. Janice Kim Rodrigues October 31, 2024 at 4:13 PM Thanks, Janice! Jack missed out.

Paige Hind October 29, 2024 at 2:38 PM Hmmm...a different perspective for me, always your writing involves a new view- hugs, <3 Kim Rodrigues October 29, 2024 at 3:21 PM Thank you, Paige! Contest helped.

Lin Lane October 29, 2024 at 7:59 AM Good riddance to that guy! Fun write, Kim. Kim Rodrigues October 29, 2024 at 8:06 AM LOL! Thank you, Lin! :)