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Jill, the one who came tumbling after - never again.

Jill Nursery Rhyme

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Jill was high upon a hill, looking fit and rather so. Kingdom phat and muscles toned, to wind released her bonnet. Without the doofus Jack, there’s not one thing Jill lacks. No bruised knees nor broken crown. A bluebird’s singing sonnet.

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Date: 11/22/2024 11:34:00 AM
So cute, Kim. Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/18/2024 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write/story. Jill, watch out for the hills... Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2024 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 11/18/2024 2:40:00 AM
A fun read and write, Kim. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2024 9:05:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie! Had fun writing for it!
Date: 11/2/2024 9:03:00 PM
Good one Kim! Jack's overrated.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2024 3:45:00 AM
Thank you, David! Jack’s descent was indeed calamitous. Rather Jill show wisdom :)
Date: 10/31/2024 5:28:00 AM
And Jack watches from afar and sighs! Good one, Kim. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/31/2024 4:13:00 PM
Thanks, Janice! Jack missed out.
Date: 10/29/2024 2:38:00 PM
Hmmm...a different perspective for me, always your writing involves a new view- hugs, <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2024 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! Contest helped.
Date: 10/29/2024 7:59:00 AM
Good riddance to that guy! Fun write, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2024 8:06:00 AM
LOL! Thank you, Lin! :)

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