High On Life

Suddenly they bloom Brilliant colors bless our eyes Intoxicating

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Jim Wilson

Date: 1/31/2009 1:35:00 PM

Hi Michael: I enjoyed the way this haiku moves easily between the exterior world of nature and the interior world of feeling. Thanks.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 1/28/2009 4:36:00 PM

Nice haiku, thanks for you comments. Love Elizabeth

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/25/2009 3:36:00 AM

Indeed, I cannot wait! Love, Kristin

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/24/2009 4:37:00 PM

Awesome haiku, can't wait to feel that warm heat upon my face while watching beautiful buds blossom..butterflies flying all around..so lovely indeed..God Bless*Tyesha

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/24/2009 11:50:00 AM

Super haiku , MJ and what a clever title ....

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/24/2009 8:45:00 AM

This is a true and wonderful reflection of the joy to come! One minute the world is dead and browm and the next color has replaced the deadness. Great title for this one! Love, Robin

Brian Strand

Date: 1/24/2009 8:04:00 AM

Colour can indeed intoxicate our senses Michael.Rgds Brian

Date: 1/24/2009 7:47:00 AM

Yes! Can't wait for spring with the below temps here in North Dakota. It is my favorite season so I can relate to your title. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing. Blessings to you. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/24/2009 7:36:00 AM

Yes! Such a gorgeous Spring haiku! I can see and smell the fragrant beauty! Excellent Michael! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/24/2009 7:14:00 AM

Excellent haiku, Michael. Brightened a gray morning! ~ Carrie

Farah Chamma

Date: 1/24/2009 7:09:00 AM

That's a beautiful Haiku Michael...It blooms with magnificence =) Farah

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/24/2009 7:04:00 AM

Yes my brother and I can't wait for them to flourish..breaking out the shorts and sandals..warm and lovely Haiku..great.