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High On Life

Suddenly they bloom
Brilliant colors bless our eyes
           Intoxicating

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Jim Wilson

January 31, 2009 at 1:35 PM

Hi Michael: I enjoyed the way this haiku moves easily between the exterior world of nature and the interior world of feeling. Thanks.

Elizabeth Neal

January 28, 2009 at 4:36 PM

Nice haiku, thanks for you comments. Love Elizabeth

Kristin Reynolds

January 25, 2009 at 3:36 AM

Indeed, I cannot wait! Love, Kristin

Tyesha Ehigiator

January 24, 2009 at 4:37 PM

Awesome haiku, can't wait to feel that warm heat upon my face while watching beautiful buds blossom..butterflies flying all around..so lovely indeed..God Bless*Tyesha

Sean Kelly

January 24, 2009 at 11:50 AM

Super haiku , MJ and what a clever title ....

Robin L. Gass

January 24, 2009 at 8:45 AM

This is a true and wonderful reflection of the joy to come! One minute the world is dead and browm and the next color has replaced the deadness. Great title for this one! Love, Robin

Brian Strand

January 24, 2009 at 8:04 AM

Colour can indeed intoxicate our senses Michael.Rgds Brian

January 24, 2009 at 7:47 AM

Yes! Can't wait for spring with the below temps here in North Dakota. It is my favorite season so I can relate to your title. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing. Blessings to you. Karen