High Noon

high noon cloud chariot like racing to god's door posted on September 27, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/27/2018 8:35:00 PM

Emphatic! Stirring! Does more than any haiku has a right to do. Bravo, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2018 8:40:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2018 2:42:00 PM

Like, Carol, I appreciate the imagery of this one

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2018 3:31:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/27/2018 5:42:00 AM

Well, that's beautiful; a well penned Haiku.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2018 9:40:00 AM

Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/27/2018 3:14:00 AM

I have an image in my head of that chariot racing, and the occupant reaching out his hands.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2018 9:40:00 AM

I love it when the reader plays along. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/27/2018 2:01:00 AM

I see them images too , you probably know its pareidolia. And as they move form other images. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2018 9:45:00 AM

That is a wonderful new word for me, Tom. Thank you very much. Line xx