High Maintenance Woman

A stunning woman, so beautiful and polite,
But causing concern, I'm thinking twice,
My girl puts my credit card to much use
Tantamount to severe financial abuse,
Although, I do enjoy her other vice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Laurie Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 11:16 PM
Hello John... look forward to your poem once the credit card is maxed out. The last line will become redundant - Lindsay
Williams Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 11:47 PM
Ah dear Lindsay, what a clever comment. I have no answer to that one......thanks so much for stopping by. you've really given me a good laugh today. .....kind regards-----John
Nunez Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 8:11 PM
Ah, ruminations of ruination with a bit of insinuation...:-)
Williams Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 4:56 AM
Clever comment Kim---nice to hear from you again---thanks for having a read-----kind regards---John
Allison Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 7:45 AM
lol great one John:-) Hugs jan xx
Williams Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 4:57 AM
I tried to her cc stands for chips, not credit card---she cut down on the chips-------Thanks Jan----John
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