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High Jacked

Max Mason operated a jackhammer in a reckless and dangerous manner. He made threats with the machine until a sheriff came on the scene: Max and hammer are in a slammer.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/23/2015 9:03:00 PM

G'day Paul... I trust that there is not a power point in Maxs' cell or he'll soon have a hole in the wall - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/31/2015 4:57:00 PM

Oops, couldn't resist "hammer" and "slammer." My forced rhyme could have led to another crime! (Have I no shame?) . . . I always enjoy your comments, Lindsay, and I love your story poems. Say hello to the 'roos for me.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/21/2015 6:17:00 PM

very clever humour Paul I especially love the punch line lol:-) happy Christmas to you and your loved ones:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2015 6:23:00 PM

Thanks Paul:-) My son arrived home today we did not know until last night if he would come home at all - it is for a short time but being together is the best gift possible:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/21/2015 6:20:00 PM

Hi, Jan. It's a delight to hear from you. Thank you for the kind comment. I wish you and your loved ones a joyful Christmas.