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High Five To Brian Strand

Doggie paw patting My leg under the table Notice me, love me, Give me a sweet treat to eat Don't make me have to repeat!

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/10/2010 11:46:00 AM

Yes ..this is adorable Doris.. and my puppy is still jumping since I got home.. so happy to see me ..he is jumping all over the cats and they are meowing him ... haha.. at least they missed me and my sons are doing all the chores today.. how wonderful.. I did not even ask.. haha..such a fun write.. good luck in Brian's contest.. with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 3:42:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Doris. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/6/2010 5:33:00 AM

Cute write, Doris! Enjoyed reading your Tanka this early afternoon! And thank you for your friendly comments!...Have a nice week...Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/6/2010 1:45:00 AM

Very cute, Doris. Brian will enjoy this as much as I did! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/5/2010 6:20:00 PM

Ahh...yes....exactly what they do!! Made me smile!!