High Five To Brian Strand

Doggie paw patting
My leg under the table
Notice me, love me,
Give me a sweet treat to eat
Don't make me have to repeat!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 10, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Yes ..this is adorable Doris.. and my puppy is still jumping since I got home.. so happy to see me ..he is jumping all over the cats and they are meowing him ... haha.. at least they missed me and my sons are doing all the chores today.. how wonderful.. I did not even ask.. haha..such a fun write.. good luck in Brian's contest.. with luv..
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July 6, 2010 at 3:42 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Doris. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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July 6, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Cute write, Doris! Enjoyed reading your Tanka this early afternoon! And thank you for your friendly comments!...Have a nice week...Gert
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July 6, 2010 at 1:45 AM
Very cute, Doris. Brian will enjoy this as much as I did! Love, Carolyn
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July 5, 2010 at 6:20 PM
Ahh...yes....exactly what they do!! Made me smile!!
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