High Comedy: Sun vs Moon
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cloud-shrouded a golden
rules tries to cover her thighs
a crowd left desert with floating clouds ~
~ moon winks at sun sun smiles
(Two pieces of monoku. Instead of writing them in single lines, I arranged them in this order - keeping them side by side - to represent the dramatic occasion.)
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