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High Comedy: Sun vs Moon

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cloud-shrouded a golden monarch lady rules tries to cover her thighs a crowd left desert with floating clouds ~ ~ moon winks at sun sun smiles (Two pieces of monoku. Instead of writing them in single lines, I arranged them in this order - keeping them side by side - to represent the dramatic occasion.)

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Date: 9/19/2020 10:46:00 AM
wow, this is REALLY awesome. I love the line on how she tries to cover her thighs. Excellent personificAtion.
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Date: 9/19/2020 12:17:00 PM
Thank you so much for this lovely comment, Andrea!!