High

an elephant sitting on my brain--and telling me to like it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 1:35 AM
- Well done ... creative, Ben :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 11:03 AM
Wow! Quite intense - love it!
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 10:54 AM
haha. definitely high.
Sambourne Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 7:00 AM
Great image, Ben. The heaviness of thought is precisely conveyed in your stand out one liner. Congratulations! Well deserved. Brian
Throne Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 5:17 AM
Thanks man!
Messina Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 3:49 AM
That's some heavy Sh-t (lol) Congrats on your win, Ben!
Throne Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 5:17 AM
Thank you!
One Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:04 AM
This one made me smile.. very creative. Congratulations on your win in the contest.
Throne Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 4:03 PM
Thank you!
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