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Hiding In Water

Stones roll down a hill Reaching a creek flowing low Making camouflage Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/25/2011 11:28:00 PM
Nice short poem. You stuck to the 5 7 5 format - which is all to the good. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:37:00 PM
R.S., how are you? As for me I'm just weeeeing! Here on the soup. I do like the little dive and disguise here. Really Thanks for sharing your wonderful haiku. Have yourself a good night~ LINDA
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:04:00 AM
Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Russell. Thank you for sharing your outstanding writing with us as I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:37:00 AM
you whipped this with your last line, russel... amazing! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:09:00 AM
Interesting topic, Russell.
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Date: 8/24/2011 10:15:00 PM
Nice one Russell mate...with love...old Jack
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Date: 8/24/2011 9:50:00 PM
Awesome image of the "camouflage" effect we see as stones roll down a hill. Quite a creative haiku, Russell! Love, Carolyn
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