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Hiding In Shadows

fog slowly dropping eerily rolling out a dense blanket begins spreading creeping over ground invading forces her cold fingers twisting knots touching slowly trembles deeply shivering in body rattle bones into the spine dark souls dance in a grey area clouds eyes without shadows onlooking feasting sinners within shawled emotions casting black falling feelings of moist darkness weeping sadness within deaths valley lost in love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/29/2015 5:56:00 AM
deep and beautiful :)) but light up...take care friend :)) rating...
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Date: 1/8/2014 3:53:00 PM
This is so sad, and so....seemingly hopeless. Is everything alright? I sure hope so. It is still a beautiful write....it's just different from the usual romance.....I wonder at the inspiration behind this one.
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Date: 1/8/2014 2:58:00 PM
I can feel a sad feeling here which shadows my being Liam.Hope you are fine.A deep thought provoking poem ..Charma
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Date: 1/8/2014 2:21:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this foggy one to read today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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