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Hiding In Cocoon

Truant night wind sails--its moon without song
I long for rapt, minstrel's tune.
My angst wrapped in cocoon
Angel child ... gone in June.

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Sara Kendrick

June 22, 2025 at 11:21 AM

This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Great rhyming words. Sara K

sara Etgen-Baker

June 21, 2025 at 4:46 PM

hauntingly beautiful and sad at the same time....especially liked the 3d line...great imagery, yellow rose

Francis J Grasso

June 21, 2025 at 10:35 AM

Wow! That's very nice! It looks like maybe you wrote this for a contest I am not going to win.

Paige Hind

June 20, 2025 at 10:44 PM

This is beautiful as it is haunting.

sara Etgen-Baker

June 20, 2025 at 10:13 AM

reading your poem left me with a lingering sense of sandness. I like the use of cocoon. Well done yellow rose

Gershon Wolf

June 19, 2025 at 8:13 PM

Love how 'cocoon' works in this englyn, Nette. Kudos! ~ Emerging from Immaturity

Len Gasun

June 19, 2025 at 2:46 PM

A well-crafted Englyn poem my dear poet sis Nette! This is quite difficult for me to do especially on any topic but you did it so well. Hope I can to try this soon and the other forms. Best winning wishes to you. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs