Hide-Out

I hear footsteps nearing me
I can't help it but hide myself;
My heart says darkness is closing in to pounce me
And trouble is spreading her wings just beside me
I can feel it and it is not far away.
I hear footsteps nearing me
I close my windows and shut the door
Fear leaps in to warn me,
I can't pull the curtains;
I wait patiently breathing heavily in my closed shell. 
Confusion then forces me to rethink
Is the hideout really a safe one?
For I still hear footsteps nearing me,
I can't help it and I know I have to hide myself.
Darkness is taking its toll on me
And when everything becomes numb
I guess I had victory;
I open the door but then it is just too late...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 2:57 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 20, 2016 at 10:17 AM
baruah, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 20, 2015 at 2:27 PM
J B, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Townsend Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 8:37 PM
This is a moving piece. You have captured the fear that lies beneath the surface of one in need. Beautifully written expression of true emotion. Peace, Love and Light be with you always. Smiles from Lolita
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