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Hideous Creature

The leaves of red and yellow are falling, in the trees the wind is sobbing; and on doors Halloween kids are knocking, a trick or treat they are wanting ! Little kids costumes are cute and darling, but older kids are frightening; some so real that I am left wondering, could they be the real thing asking ! One hideous creature moved like lightning, as I turned and started running; then, the creature was whispering- kissing, and my frantic screams silencing ! _______________________ October 16, 2021 Poetry/Monorhyme/Hideous Creature Copyright Protected, ID 10-1397-891-16 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Halloween Monorhyme sponsor, Caren Krutsinger, Judged 11/9/2021

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Date: 10/18/2021 9:47:00 AM
Constance, long time dear friend. I love this poem as I love Halloween. I have worn many masks in my lifetime, but they are all in the past now. I've been working for Glenn County Behavioral Health for the last few years. I've missed reading your poetry, MJ
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Constance La France
Date: 10/18/2021 3:49:00 PM
Michael, oh my goodness, so nice to hear from you, last time we spoke you were in school and happy you are working, thanks for liking my poem, I have missed you too ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/17/2021 8:29:00 AM
Constance, a wonderful 'frightful' piece... it is so true we never know whats behind those masks.... Congratulations on your High Honors! Blessings, Paulette
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Constance La France
Date: 10/17/2021 8:34:00 AM
Paulette, thanks for the visit and comment, this is fiction of course ~ love and serenity _Constance

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