HIDE AND SHRIEK

A whispered shhh  hung in the air
Tall grass rustled nearby
A slight sniffy, snorty snout sound
Preceded the crinkly crunch of dry grass
Sweat slithered across my brow
A large head appeared
Violently shaking
Hanging jowls jousting
Saliva arcing aimlessly
A growl ruffling the air
We ran
Screams scurrying ahead
Saliva spewing demon behind
Fear fueled our flight
Her hand thinly slipping from mine
She fell
The demon approached
We heard her
Breathlessly shriek

“DAD
          ….CALL THE DOG”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Flood Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 3:25 PM
Great fun, John. Enjoyed the twist. Terry
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 7:42 PM
H O W L - A R I O U S!! One of your all-time best, John!
Romios Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 11:47 AM
Cleverly done , John! I liked the drama and visuals in this one! My heart was pounding, too!))) Pangie
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 9:16 AM
thanks for the giggle John, I guess dad was like a guard dog lol:-) hugs jan xx
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