Hide and Seek

a cough in my throat
or sneeze tickling my nose ~
hide and seek woes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Goller Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Hide and seek that brings back some memories. very nice Haiku, God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 11:57 PM
Thanks, Erich!
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 7:58 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your wonderful poetry Rhonda. Love, Carol
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 11:57 PM
Thanks, Carol!
Clark Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 5:16 AM
Good haiku Rhonda
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 11:56 PM
Thanks Kevin!
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 1:58 AM
a vivid haiku that enchants, rhonda... much enjoyed, achoo!..:) huggs!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 11:55 PM
Thanks, Nette!
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 1:28 AM
Good haiku Rhonda, thank you for sweet comment on mine poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 11:54 PM
Thanks for your comments, Anne Lise!
Poet Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 1:09 AM
Yeah....sure those are woes of hide and seek..this reminds me of my childhood days.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 11:53 PM
One of my favorite childhood games. Thanks for reading today.
Johnson Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 12:13 AM
Fine haiku Rhonda. I am not too good at these. thank you for your comment on my narrrative. I have never quite come to terms with not taking my mom into my home but I had to work for a living and she would still have been alone. Thank you for your warm comments. Love, Joyce
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 11:23 PM
Thank you, Joyce! The way you express yourself is a gift. We never know when our stories will touch someone in a similar situation.
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