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Hide and Seek

Tree shadow laughing
Underneath ivory puffs
Intermittently
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 * won 6th honorable mention in Raul Morenos contest *

Copyright © Sandra Hudson | Year Posted 2009

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/8/2011 5:01:00 AM I have stopped by to read some of your excellent poetry today. I hope to be back soon to read more. I wish you the best with your writing always Sandra. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 8/10/2009 1:28:00 AM Hi Sandra, Congratulations on placing in this contest. I can certainly see why. Your Haiku is wonderful. Lovingly, DAS-J PS sorry to be so late commenting...I've been recovering files... and there's still more to go. Login to Reply

Brandee Augustus Date: 8/3/2009 1:55:00 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Raul's contest! Login to Reply

Sue Mason Date: 7/27/2009 1:39:00 PM Very cute write here, Sandra! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/27/2009 12:52:00 PM Sandra, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 7/25/2009 12:57:00 PM love the title! love the haiku! Sandra! congrats!! jimbo Login to Reply

Trudy Diane Rider Date: 7/25/2009 10:17:00 AM Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Sandra. ~Trudy~ Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 7/25/2009 8:30:00 AM Congratulaltions, Very nice indded. Joyce Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 7/25/2009 6:43:00 AM Congratulations on this wonderful entry, Sandra. Well deserving a win!! :) Carrie Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 7/25/2009 2:49:00 AM Congrats on your success in Raul's contest. SandraRgds Brian Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 7/25/2009 2:03:00 AM Sandra, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/1/2009 3:37:00 PM Great Haiku Sandra>> Soup Mail>>James Login to Reply

Date: 7/1/2009 8:08:00 AM What a creative view. I really like the second line. Much captured in just three lines. Thank you for sharing them and for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a good day! Karen Login to Reply

Yoni Dvorkis Date: 6/30/2009 7:43:00 PM this is really fun. it's such a universal image I can instantly understand what you mean by the shadow laughing even though I venture a tree blowing in the wind has never been described this way. the ivory puffs is cute. makes me think of cream puffs I can pluck out of the sky, they'd be vanilla flavored, naturally:) btw, my poem 'wprds of the master' references the book that my 'wisdom' comes from. none of it is mine, I'm just good at paraphrasing. it's called 'A Course in Miracles' Login to Reply

Heidie Buys Date: 6/30/2009 4:09:00 PM Brings back many memories of lazy afternoons. So very beautifully painted. Enjoyed this one. Love Heidie Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 6/29/2009 10:27:00 PM Perfect , AA , as ever . So the lost has been found ; no ! it's lost again ; no there it is . Nimbus ! , behave !! ...... Login to Reply

Hyle Chu Date: 6/29/2009 9:40:00 PM Impeccable syllable count. Thanks for the spot on my "Summer Grind". Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 6/29/2009 8:30:00 PM great read on Raul's pic! Sandra!! good work!! and thanks for comments! again, you got me actually laughing out loud! love your "loca" sense of humor!!! you rock! Sandra! Jimbo Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/29/2009 7:42:00 PM It's lovely the way the trees play "hide and seek" with the clouds above, isn't it? Delightful, uplifting haiku, Alexandra! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 6/29/2009 7:42:00 PM I love your take on the pic...this is a very good haiku. Login to Reply

Kareena Goodwin Date: 6/29/2009 7:31:00 PM I like the first line. this is nice work. im new to the soup so if you can check out my work and tell me what you think Login to Reply