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Tree shadow laughing Underneath ivory puffs Intermittently ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ * won 6th honorable mention in Raul Morenos contest *

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/8/2011 5:01:00 AM

I have stopped by to read some of your excellent poetry today. I hope to be back soon to read more. I wish you the best with your writing always Sandra. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/10/2009 1:28:00 AM

Hi Sandra, Congratulations on placing in this contest. I can certainly see why. Your Haiku is wonderful. Lovingly, DAS-J PS sorry to be so late commenting...I've been recovering files... and there's still more to go.

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/3/2009 1:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Raul's contest!

Sue Mason

Date: 7/27/2009 1:39:00 PM

Very cute write here, Sandra! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2009 12:52:00 PM

Sandra, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/25/2009 12:57:00 PM

love the title! love the haiku! Sandra! congrats!! jimbo

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 7/25/2009 10:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Sandra. ~Trudy~

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/25/2009 8:30:00 AM

Congratulaltions, Very nice indded. Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/25/2009 6:43:00 AM

Congratulations on this wonderful entry, Sandra. Well deserving a win!! :) Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 7/25/2009 2:49:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest. SandraRgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/25/2009 2:03:00 AM

Sandra, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

James Fraser

Date: 7/1/2009 3:37:00 PM

Great Haiku Sandra>> Soup Mail>>James

Date: 7/1/2009 8:08:00 AM

What a creative view. I really like the second line. Much captured in just three lines. Thank you for sharing them and for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a good day! Karen

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 6/30/2009 7:43:00 PM

this is really fun. it's such a universal image I can instantly understand what you mean by the shadow laughing even though I venture a tree blowing in the wind has never been described this way. the ivory puffs is cute. makes me think of cream puffs I can pluck out of the sky, they'd be vanilla flavored, naturally:) btw, my poem 'wprds of the master' references the book that my 'wisdom' comes from. none of it is mine, I'm just good at paraphrasing. it's called 'A Course in Miracles'

Heidie Buys

Date: 6/30/2009 4:09:00 PM

Brings back many memories of lazy afternoons. So very beautifully painted. Enjoyed this one. Love Heidie

Sean Kelly

Date: 6/29/2009 10:27:00 PM

Perfect , AA , as ever . So the lost has been found ; no ! it's lost again ; no there it is . Nimbus ! , behave !! ......

Hyle Chu

Date: 6/29/2009 9:40:00 PM

Impeccable syllable count. Thanks for the spot on my "Summer Grind".

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/29/2009 8:30:00 PM

great read on Raul's pic! Sandra!! good work!! and thanks for comments! again, you got me actually laughing out loud! love your "loca" sense of humor!!! you rock! Sandra! Jimbo

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/29/2009 7:42:00 PM

I love your take on the pic...this is a very good haiku.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/29/2009 7:42:00 PM

It's lovely the way the trees play "hide and seek" with the clouds above, isn't it? Delightful, uplifting haiku, Alexandra! Love, Carolyn

Kareena Goodwin

Date: 6/29/2009 7:31:00 PM

I like the first line. this is nice work. im new to the soup so if you can check out my work and tell me what you think