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Tree shadow laughing
Underneath ivory puffs
Intermittently
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 * won 6th honorable mention in Raul Morenos contest *

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 8, 2011 at 5:01 AM

I have stopped by to read some of your excellent poetry today. I hope to be back soon to read more. I wish you the best with your writing always Sandra. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

August 10, 2009 at 1:28 AM

Hi Sandra, Congratulations on placing in this contest. I can certainly see why. Your Haiku is wonderful. Lovingly, DAS-J PS sorry to be so late commenting...I've been recovering files... and there's still more to go.

Brandee Augustus

August 3, 2009 at 1:55 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Raul's contest!

Sue Mason

July 27, 2009 at 1:39 PM

Very cute write here, Sandra! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 27, 2009 at 12:52 PM

Sandra, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

July 25, 2009 at 12:57 PM

love the title! love the haiku! Sandra! congrats!! jimbo

Trudy Diane Rider

July 25, 2009 at 10:17 AM

Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Sandra. ~Trudy~

Joyce Johnson

July 25, 2009 at 8:30 AM

Congratulaltions, Very nice indded. Joyce

Carrie Richards

July 25, 2009 at 6:43 AM

Congratulations on this wonderful entry, Sandra. Well deserving a win!! :) Carrie

Brian Strand

July 25, 2009 at 2:49 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest. SandraRgds Brian

Raul Moreno

July 25, 2009 at 2:03 AM

Sandra, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

James Fraser

July 1, 2009 at 3:37 PM

Great Haiku Sandra>> Soup Mail>>James

July 1, 2009 at 8:08 AM

What a creative view. I really like the second line. Much captured in just three lines. Thank you for sharing them and for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a good day! Karen

Yoni Dvorkis

June 30, 2009 at 7:43 PM

this is really fun. it's such a universal image I can instantly understand what you mean by the shadow laughing even though I venture a tree blowing in the wind has never been described this way. the ivory puffs is cute. makes me think of cream puffs I can pluck out of the sky, they'd be vanilla flavored, naturally:) btw, my poem 'wprds of the master' references the book that my 'wisdom' comes from. none of it is mine, I'm just good at paraphrasing. it's called 'A Course in Miracles'

Heidie Buys

June 30, 2009 at 4:09 PM

Brings back many memories of lazy afternoons. So very beautifully painted. Enjoyed this one. Love Heidie

Sean Kelly

June 29, 2009 at 10:27 PM

Perfect , AA , as ever . So the lost has been found ; no ! it's lost again ; no there it is . Nimbus ! , behave !! ......

Hyle Chu

June 29, 2009 at 9:40 PM

Impeccable syllable count. Thanks for the spot on my "Summer Grind".

James Marshall Goff

June 29, 2009 at 8:30 PM

great read on Raul's pic! Sandra!! good work!! and thanks for comments! again, you got me actually laughing out loud! love your "loca" sense of humor!!! you rock! Sandra! Jimbo