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YOU, eagerly recite those three words - little did I know they would follow me like rain, along adventures - slowly connecting dots whispering a sweet invite, making me breathless and weak YOU, sensually speak those three words - over and over again " let’s play, Hide and Seek " __________________ ~ A little Scribble ~ I think to myself- “ I have always enjoyed this game. ”

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Arjun Jangid

Date: 3/20/2022 5:51:00 PM

Great

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/20/2022 7:24:00 PM

Thank you, Arjun. My best to you. :) Brandy

Rob Levasseur

Date: 12/25/2020 2:31:00 PM

I can't put my finger on the milieu you create when you write. Your perspective is bright and alluring. You dispense with prose-like writing, and in its place your words.

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/5/2020 6:06:00 PM

Ahh, such game can’t never be too old to play ;) Beautiful, Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/5/2020 8:55:00 PM

Thank you Akkina. You are exactly right. I enjoyed creating this playful little scribble. :) Brandy

John Watt

Date: 10/26/2020 10:29:00 PM

A tantalizing write from my favorite little scribbler. Your words build a bridge between the playfulness of children and that of grown-ups. "Whispering a sweet invite", who doesn't long for that at the end of a hard day? Playful and sensual: classic Brandy. Blessings, my friend.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/27/2020 7:11:00 PM

Me !?! Whisper a sweet invite ... Perhaps. Oh yes, of course. :) Thank you John. There is something exciting about playing a game of Hide and Seek- in this way. You and your thoughts are appreciated. I am smiling with you saying that I am your favorite scribbler. So kind of you to say. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Brandy

Edward Ibeh

Date: 10/19/2020 1:59:00 PM

Really nicely done, Nicole:-) Excellent poetry, as usual!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/19/2020 7:46:00 PM

Thank you Edward. Such a sweet thing to say. I am just being me. I appreciate your kind words. :) Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 10/17/2020 5:38:00 AM

Hide and seek with a sensual twist, Very nicely penned Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/17/2020 2:56:00 PM

1, 2, 3, 4... Ready or not, here I Come. :) I am smiling and blushing, all at the same time. An exciting game of Hide and Seek- indeed. Thank you Joseph. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Judy Ball

Date: 10/14/2020 10:05:00 PM

Nicely done Brandy. The pic fits so well and adds to it beautifully. God Bless, JB

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/15/2020 7:42:00 PM

So kind of you to say. I think so too. Thank you Judy. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Running Wolves

Date: 10/12/2020 3:28:00 PM

I once played hide and seek with a girl. After three days of hiding I realized she never tried to find me... bwahahahaha, oh why am i laughing... ;-)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/12/2020 7:11:00 PM

It's okay Robert. It sounds like a game many kids play. Taunt and tease. As you get older, being left behind like that- well, you learn to adapt. Find something else to do. As far as not being popular with the ladies- sorry about that my friend. I appreciate your friendship. Thank you for your kindness. ~ Brandy

Running Wolves
Date: 10/12/2020 6:35:00 PM

When i was a little kid. My older cousins would say lets play hide and seek to get rid of us younger kids. We would go hide and they'd never come look for us. So I was making that into a joke about how I was never popular with the ladies so to speak. Most likely a bad joke though unfortunately very true.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/12/2020 5:04:00 PM

I'm not sure why you are laughing either. Sounds like you played a different game of hide and seek, than what I am talking about here. Hmm, maybe not. I'm not really sure. Thank you Robert. I am smiling now. :) Brandy

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/12/2020 11:43:00 AM

Love the voice of experience! Aloha! Rico

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/12/2020 5:02:00 PM

Thank you Rico. Yes, experience is found within. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2020 11:06:00 AM

sounds like a fun sexy way to play that game. Very nice!!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/12/2020 5:00:00 PM

:) Thank you Andrea. You are right. A fun and sexy way to play this game. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/12/2020 7:09:00 AM

So romantic, Brandy. It's ages since I saw children play hide and seek these days. ~~

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/12/2020 4:58:00 PM

Thank you Victor. In this scribble, Hide and Seek holds a different meaning. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Silent One

Date: 10/12/2020 7:05:00 AM

is it a sensual hide and seek? A tender poem with a bit of twist..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/12/2020 4:56:00 PM

Yes, this is sensual Hide and Seek. :) The possibilities are endless as to what is happening in such a moment. ( I am sure you know ) Thank you Silent One. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/12/2020 6:04:00 AM

Tender and romantic write my friend. You touch sensuality with a blush and it speaks for you. Well done, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/12/2020 4:54:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. So kind of you to say. That I "touch sensuality with a blush" I am smiling and blushing- of course, all at the same time. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 10/12/2020 4:18:00 AM

Very sensual and seductive my sweet friend. So you've always enjoyed this game...I assume you're talking about the "adult' version? Your pen flows with sensual ink, Brandy, nicely done. Hugs.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/12/2020 4:52:00 PM

Of course I have always enjoyed this game. :) Yes, I am talking about the "Adult" version. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you John. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2020 2:00:00 AM

I hope you're allowing me to 'play' a metaphorical hide & seek, Brandy. I love this! As always, you tempt with words and visuals. Regards & Hugs // paul

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/12/2020 4:47:00 PM

Smiling at you and blushing too. :) If that is where your imagination takes you. Thank you Paul for your wonderful comment. Words and visuals tempt me, so here I am once again- with another playful poem. :) Brandy

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/12/2020 12:30:00 AM

A very sensual write Brandy that teases the reader, it gets you thinking how will it end. Hope you're well Tom

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/12/2020 4:42:00 PM

Teasing moments indeed. Yes, this is a sensual scribble. I am sure the ending will surprise many. Thank you Tom. I am doing good. I hope you are too. :) Brandy

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/11/2020 11:50:00 PM

It never fails to enlighten me, the way one constructs and shapes words or phrase as you have here, Brandy. an amazing poem, just love it...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/12/2020 4:39:00 PM

It's all in the way you see things. :) And I see things differently than most. Thank you Harry for your lovely comment. :) Brandy

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/11/2020 8:01:00 PM

You certainly stung me out there, Brandy... waiting for ILY at the end... Nicely done! :) gw

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/11/2020 8:09:00 PM

Surprise !!! :) Sometimes those three little words aren't what you think. (Soft giggle) Thank you Gershon. I am happy that you enjoyed this playful little scribble. :) Brandy

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/11/2020 6:40:00 PM

Very tantalizing, especially like the line 'follow me like rain' - this is grown up Hide and Seek ;)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/11/2020 6:56:00 PM

Yes, grown up hide and seek. :) Thank you Michelle. Just scribbling something playful. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy