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Hide and Seek

YOU, 
eagerly recite
those three words
- little did I know
they would follow me like
 rain,
along adventures
- slowly connecting dots
whispering a sweet invite,
making me breathless and weak
YOU,
 sensually speak
those three words
- over and over again
" let’s play, Hide and Seek "


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  ~ A little Scribble ~

I think to myself- “ I have always enjoyed this game. ”

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Arjun Jangid March 20, 2022 at 5:51 PM Great Brandy Nicole March 20, 2022 at 7:24 PM Thank you, Arjun. My best to you. :) Brandy

Rob Levasseur December 25, 2020 at 2:31 PM I can't put my finger on the milieu you create when you write. Your perspective is bright and alluring. You dispense with prose-like writing, and in its place your words.

Akkina Downing November 5, 2020 at 6:06 PM Ahh, such game can’t never be too old to play ;) Beautiful, Brandy Brandy Nicole November 5, 2020 at 8:55 PM Thank you Akkina. You are exactly right. I enjoyed creating this playful little scribble. :) Brandy

John Watt October 26, 2020 at 10:29 PM A tantalizing write from my favorite little scribbler. Your words build a bridge between the playfulness of children and that of grown-ups. "Whispering a sweet invite", who doesn't long for that at the end of a hard day? Playful and sensual: classic Brandy. Blessings, my friend. Brandy Nicole October 27, 2020 at 7:11 PM Me !?! Whisper a sweet invite ... Perhaps. Oh yes, of course. :) Thank you John. There is something exciting about playing a game of Hide and Seek- in this way. You and your thoughts are appreciated. I am smiling with you saying that I am your favorite scribbler. So kind of you to say. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Brandy

Edward Ibeh October 19, 2020 at 1:59 PM Really nicely done, Nicole:-) Excellent poetry, as usual! Brandy Nicole October 19, 2020 at 7:46 PM Thank you Edward. Such a sweet thing to say. I am just being me. I appreciate your kind words. :) Brandy

Joseph May October 17, 2020 at 5:38 AM Hide and seek with a sensual twist, Very nicely penned Brandy.. Brandy Nicole October 17, 2020 at 2:56 PM 1, 2, 3, 4... Ready or not, here I Come. :) I am smiling and blushing, all at the same time. An exciting game of Hide and Seek- indeed. Thank you Joseph. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Judy Ball October 14, 2020 at 10:05 PM Nicely done Brandy. The pic fits so well and adds to it beautifully. God Bless, JB Brandy Nicole October 15, 2020 at 7:42 PM So kind of you to say. I think so too. Thank you Judy. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Running Wolves October 12, 2020 at 3:28 PM I once played hide and seek with a girl. After three days of hiding I realized she never tried to find me... bwahahahaha, oh why am i laughing... ;-) Brandy Nicole October 12, 2020 at 7:11 PM It's okay Robert. It sounds like a game many kids play. Taunt and tease. As you get older, being left behind like that- well, you learn to adapt. Find something else to do. As far as not being popular with the ladies- sorry about that my friend. I appreciate your friendship. Thank you for your kindness. ~ Brandy Running Wolves October 12, 2020 at 6:35 PM When i was a little kid. My older cousins would say lets play hide and seek to get rid of us younger kids. We would go hide and they'd never come look for us. So I was making that into a joke about how I was never popular with the ladies so to speak. Most likely a bad joke though unfortunately very true. Brandy Nicole October 12, 2020 at 5:04 PM I'm not sure why you are laughing either. Sounds like you played a different game of hide and seek, than what I am talking about here. Hmm, maybe not. I'm not really sure. Thank you Robert. I am smiling now. :) Brandy

Rico Leffanta October 12, 2020 at 11:43 AM Love the voice of experience! Aloha! Rico Brandy Nicole October 12, 2020 at 5:02 PM Thank you Rico. Yes, experience is found within. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2020 at 11:06 AM sounds like a fun sexy way to play that game. Very nice!! Brandy Nicole October 12, 2020 at 5:00 PM :) Thank you Andrea. You are right. A fun and sexy way to play this game. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Victor Buhagiar October 12, 2020 at 7:09 AM So romantic, Brandy. It's ages since I saw children play hide and seek these days. ~~ Brandy Nicole October 12, 2020 at 4:58 PM Thank you Victor. In this scribble, Hide and Seek holds a different meaning. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Silent One October 12, 2020 at 7:05 AM is it a sensual hide and seek? A tender poem with a bit of twist.. Brandy Nicole October 12, 2020 at 4:56 PM Yes, this is sensual Hide and Seek. :) The possibilities are endless as to what is happening in such a moment. ( I am sure you know ) Thank you Silent One. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit October 12, 2020 at 6:04 AM Tender and romantic write my friend. You touch sensuality with a blush and it speaks for you. Well done, Brandy. Brandy Nicole October 12, 2020 at 4:54 PM Thank you Vijay. So kind of you to say. That I "touch sensuality with a blush" I am smiling and blushing- of course, all at the same time. :) Brandy

John Gondolf October 12, 2020 at 4:18 AM Very sensual and seductive my sweet friend. So you've always enjoyed this game...I assume you're talking about the "adult' version? Your pen flows with sensual ink, Brandy, nicely done. Hugs. Brandy Nicole October 12, 2020 at 4:52 PM Of course I have always enjoyed this game. :) Yes, I am talking about the "Adult" version. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you John. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus October 12, 2020 at 2:00 AM I hope you're allowing me to 'play' a metaphorical hide & seek, Brandy. I love this! As always, you tempt with words and visuals. Regards & Hugs // paul Brandy Nicole October 12, 2020 at 4:47 PM Smiling at you and blushing too. :) If that is where your imagination takes you. Thank you Paul for your wonderful comment. Words and visuals tempt me, so here I am once again- with another playful poem. :) Brandy

Tom Cunningham October 12, 2020 at 12:30 AM A very sensual write Brandy that teases the reader, it gets you thinking how will it end. Hope you're well Tom Brandy Nicole October 12, 2020 at 4:42 PM Teasing moments indeed. Yes, this is a sensual scribble. I am sure the ending will surprise many. Thank you Tom. I am doing good. I hope you are too. :) Brandy

Harry Horsman October 11, 2020 at 11:50 PM It never fails to enlighten me, the way one constructs and shapes words or phrase as you have here, Brandy. an amazing poem, just love it... Brandy Nicole October 12, 2020 at 4:39 PM It's all in the way you see things. :) And I see things differently than most. Thank you Harry for your lovely comment. :) Brandy

Gershon Wolf October 11, 2020 at 8:01 PM You certainly stung me out there, Brandy... waiting for ILY at the end... Nicely done! :) gw Brandy Nicole October 11, 2020 at 8:09 PM Surprise !!! :) Sometimes those three little words aren't what you think. (Soft giggle) Thank you Gershon. I am happy that you enjoyed this playful little scribble. :) Brandy

Michelle Faulkner October 11, 2020 at 6:40 PM Very tantalizing, especially like the line 'follow me like rain' - this is grown up Hide and Seek ;) Brandy Nicole October 11, 2020 at 6:56 PM Yes, grown up hide and seek. :) Thank you Michelle. Just scribbling something playful. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy