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I feel the deciet from every breath that comes from your body.
Every word  only digs you deeper in the grave once you have dug 
for yourself.

As i play the part of the fool.
But on this drive togather it is you who are decived.
Your lies no longer grasp my heart.

The bardwire  no longer cuts my lips leaving the taste.
of blood in my mouth. 
For Like insect in a caccoon  my anger has transformed me
into another.

This new creature who only gains plessure through pain.
He thrives on anger and his thirst for revenge.
His smile to you is the warning  but as you continue
to decive  you only enrage him more.

He no longer cares forthe reason why its become a obesession to him.
The nights drive will prove fullfilling for one but not all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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artlyy Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 7:04 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 2:49 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 12:13 AM
Tom,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 8:10 AM
Hi Tom, hope to see you post a new poem. SKAT
A  Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 8:06 AM
Tom, wonderful poem. Skat
Mindova Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 7:49 AM
HELLO FROM YAMBOL IN BULGARIA.
Harvey Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 8:59 PM
Hi Tom, Good job! Its good to see another from Bermy on the soup. You may want to review your work a few times before posting. there are a number of spelling and grammarical errors in this your first poem. All the best. Keep up the good work. Eugene
Shahwan Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 7:19 PM
Good poetry. All the best.
Brown Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 3:21 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tom. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
W Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 11:05 AM
interesting dark writing good write keep posting.........always kate
Loveless Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 10:37 AM
beautiful. i love the imagry. mmmmmh. the lines, i could pick out so many, that i love. the barbwire no longer cuts my lips. nice work. i look roward to reading more. --raiin
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