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Hidden Worlds

Some things I think are overhead Are also underneath my bed And this is true of you, as well. So mark my words now, as I tell: Beneath the clothing bins we store, Under the stairs and basement floor, Beneath the tracks of snails and slugs, The homes of chipmunks, moles, and bugs, Beneath the cracks where waters run Through garnet and magnesium, Below the mantle—an iron core, More mantle, crust, then ocean floor, With thermal vents, volcanic glint, Turtles, whales, and tiny shrimp, Beneath the driving winds and rain, We find the stratosphere again. And deeper still, the moon’s bright face, Then stars and wonders strewn through space. So maybe now my claim is clear; We rest upon a little sphere, and “Up” and “Down” make sense alone To Beings who are stuck at home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/10/2023 2:00:00 PM
This is very lovely
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Carol Mays
Date: 5/10/2023 8:11:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/31/2021 7:21:00 AM
Very clever ~ a wonderful poem, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2019 4:54:00 AM
Carol; I love your hidden world. I search for it to. Nature does reveal itself to those in tune. Been so busy my muse is hiding. Hope to chase her down soon, Love, SuZ
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Date: 1/10/2018 8:38:00 AM
The hidden world is just open for us with little ifs and buts....Good read Carol.
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Carol Mays
Date: 1/10/2018 9:14:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem.
Date: 12/13/2017 5:56:00 AM
just amazing sweet Carol :) -luloo
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Carol Mays
Date: 12/14/2017 10:12:00 PM
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Date: 12/12/2017 2:46:00 PM
I love this :)
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Carol Mays
Date: 12/12/2017 10:38:00 PM
Thanks! I appreciate all your comments.
Date: 12/12/2017 1:45:00 PM
excellent writing carol. very deep understanding there with the world
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Carol Mays
Date: 12/12/2017 2:04:00 PM
Thank you. This poem was supposed to be playful, but it took a lot of work.

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