Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Hidden Truth

A crazy discovery one buzzing bee
Look beyond the image circling with light
I found a snake entered the garden
crawling with hate in his grass
blocking his strike after a comment 
on my personal like a bat coming out of the sun
Shallow dripping poisonous darkness you reek
I can see behind your mask 
all words are fake 
Rather than honey honesty I am real
an advance in the human knowledge stands over
In false judgement 
amazing what happens and when one can see
Smiling in love even the heart is soaked in sunshine
the truth always reveals in Heavenly council
Such sadness weeps in the end 
in the all seeing eye of our creator 
What it reveals to me bitterness
I know one makes mistakes in life
never a false poet I pen how it draws

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Demetrios Trifiatis December 19, 2014 at 5:54 AM " The hidden truth much more valuable than the apparent." Heraclitus, Greek philosopher, 544-480 BC. If we search for the hidden truth then we have to look up to the heavens, my dear friend, Liam. Hidden truth down on earth is not that important but still is helpful. A deep well-thought poem you have created dear, Liam! Liam Mcdaid December 19, 2014 at 6:29 AM so very true demetrios i sat back and watched something just shook my head and wrote this over a space of time thank you dear friend for the heartfelt words really very inspirational your comment have a great weekend pal

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 19, 2014 at 12:55 AM Feeling your pain, Liam...I'm sorry you're going through this but all will work out in the end...big hug sent to you, Rhonda Liam Mcdaid December 19, 2014 at 6:52 AM it works out perfect how i see it rhonda bless you dear friend have a wonderful weekend

Cherl Dunn December 18, 2014 at 6:04 PM Excellent write here my friend great job, cheri Liam Mcdaid December 19, 2014 at 6:06 AM sorry cherl you reply seemed to have gone to another

Maurice Yvonne December 18, 2014 at 4:45 PM There is a lot in this write, excellent job. Liam Mcdaid December 18, 2014 at 4:45 PM this richard is a true fact even i found it hard to believe smiling wishing you a great evening thank you for the excellent comment dear friend

Richard Lamoureux December 18, 2014 at 4:24 PM Lots to contemplate with this piece Liam. Liam Mcdaid December 18, 2014 at 4:47 PM sorry richard your reply went upwards

Ken Carroll December 18, 2014 at 4:03 PM Good share buddy..Reflective and deep.. Liam Mcdaid December 18, 2014 at 4:09 PM you know me ken sometimes you got to speak your mind pal heartfelt comment bless you

M. L. Kiser December 18, 2014 at 3:55 PM We all misjudge, someone and we are misjudged. It's learning from walking both paths that is what's important. You grow to see the light. Liam Mcdaid December 18, 2014 at 4:07 PM its the light of truth always shines as its true in the end excellent comment dear friend bless you

Eileen Manassian December 18, 2014 at 2:32 PM Liam....Liam...I'm sorry to read this. I feel the hurt and pain in every line. You know what? Your line....The truth always reveals in Heavenly council is what should give your heart comfort. We will be misunderstood. We will be misjudged. God knows all. Don't become bitter. Stand in the light. Hugs to you Liam Mcdaid December 18, 2014 at 2:42 PM not bitter eileen just very disappointed in some of the human race who stand and judge another i just pray for their souls so sad to see wonderful comment dear friend bless you pal

Charmaine Chircop December 18, 2014 at 1:23 PM So deep this is Liam! Liam Mcdaid December 18, 2014 at 1:32 PM this is very deep charmaine truth in every word thank you dear friend it upsets me to see such ugliness in judgement on site bless you always pal Liam Mcdaid December 18, 2014 at 1:26 PM exactly as its drawn is how it is tim thank you deeply pal excellent comment bless you pal

Tim Smith December 18, 2014 at 1:14 PM Very deep my friend....you call it like you see it...cheers Liam Mcdaid December 18, 2014 at 1:28 PM sorry tim you reply went upwards