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Hidden Truth

Hidden Truth The truth is not told from the way I look cause inside my head confusion's a cook. It's boiling, steaming and scattered all around It's sizzling, bubbling and no peace found. It's questions unanswered and fearing to ask It's truths to tell but too hard a task. It's words unsaid in fear of the tongue and smiles to share inside deep down. It's feelings to reveal direct from the heart and anger to let go like a piercing dart. It's all these things locked up inside fearing to leave the place they hide. Dedicated to all those quiet people who keep there feelings locked up inside."I know how you feel".......love Maryam*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/24/2009 4:16:00 PM
This is so beautifully expressed, Maryam! I understand these feelings, too. Like the others, writing is deffinately the outlet! Wonderful and wise! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/24/2009 2:05:00 PM
Great poem Maryam! Yeah, I used to feel like that a lot, but that's why I use poetry as an outlet. It helps alot. We need to catch up sometime! Love always ~Jen~
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Date: 3/24/2009 1:00:00 PM
wonderful my maryam! Let it all out!
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Date: 3/22/2009 8:06:00 PM
thank u. every one thinks that ppl who are quiet feel nothing (and sometimes mean nothing). i hope to learn to speak up sometimes, and when i can't i will remember yur poem and it will give me courage. :)
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Date: 3/22/2009 6:51:00 AM
And I know how you feel. Beautiful expression. Thank goodness for poetry, right? Well written! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/21/2009 3:48:00 PM
Maryam, you reveal your beautiful soul in your work. A very tender, heartfelt poem!
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Date: 3/21/2009 3:40:00 PM
Sensational piece Maryam! Revolutionary wisdom for a many needy souls~ You were dead on with every word and stanza...just awesome writing all together. You went with it and you succeeded... god bless ya.. janers
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