Debbie Duncan Poet Blank verse

Hidden Path

A shadow falls over the ruins.
As the path leads her to where 
She wants to go.
The adventures played out
In her mind.
Heading off the beaten path
Is what she read about 
so many times.
In search of hidden gems 
That sparkled and shined.   


4 am 6/ 13/ 2017

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Muhammad Imtiaz February 28, 2018 at 1:51 AM Nice poem......the path to glory is through such beaten paths............hope she get what she is looking for or struggling for

Suzanne C. Goudreau October 27, 2017 at 10:14 PM Lovely poetic write Debbie. Hope she finds her prince charming along the same path!

Old Man Emu June 17, 2017 at 10:21 PM Hi Debbie, nicely written, evokes memories of adventure and discovery. Regards, Craig

Maria Williams June 17, 2017 at 7:11 AM Hope she found those hidden gems. A gem of a poem...Maria

Andrea Dietrich June 16, 2017 at 9:01 PM Sweet one for getting off the beaten path, Debbie. Glad to finally see this new one of yours. I am still way behind here but promise to see that last new one of yours later!

Joseph May June 15, 2017 at 5:32 AM The ruins hold many treasures...Nicely penned Debbie

Connie Marcum Wong June 14, 2017 at 9:21 AM I like the mystique of the ruins Debbie. It reminds me of Ireland. Very nice! : )

White Wolf June 14, 2017 at 5:02 AM Intriguing write, Debbie! Find those hidden gems! Nicely done