Sound harmony – bleak evening – 2 long “i” in a row evokes the feeling that the evening is dragging on; sadness/suddenly/sound; longing reminds me long (waiting); hearth/heart/hart…!
it’s a bleak evening wood crackles in the shabby hearth sadness in my heart... suddenly a forest sound – for his doe longs lonely hart
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