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Hidden New Blood

Hidden within the dark shadows of night A dim flicker where once was a bright shining light. Awaiting for someone who with curious intentions Brings out desires too hot to mention It seeps from within and the fire awakens The wind picks up its pace and the ground is shaken All else leaves but two hearts pumping The mind is lost, the body is humping Each on a path to different ends Where it leads all depends One wanting to feel alive The other only to survive. Giving and taking what they desire Soothing the struggles, igniting the fire He leaves relieved and feeling quite right She relaxes knowing all is ok for at least one more night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/27/2015 12:08:00 AM
Rose.. Congrats on your fabulous winner write, I was impressed!
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Date: 8/20/2015 6:54:00 PM
Hi Rose, Congratulations --- Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:00:00 PM
Rose, Congratulations with your wonderful win! **SKAT**
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Date: 8/17/2015 9:28:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Rose! In modern times living in present is the most practical approach, Though we hope for gud in future too!!
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:55:00 AM
This is indeed hot, congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/15/2015 5:11:00 PM
All in a nights work. "Giving and taking what they desire"...sums it all up. Congrats on the win
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Date: 8/15/2015 12:06:00 PM
And life goes on. . . . This one captures the essence of a life that has become complacent, kind of sad one that reflects for me how many people have become today. congrats on your win.
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Rose Henderson
Date: 8/16/2015 3:46:00 AM
Very interesting.. Yes i can see where youre coming from.. Just maybe of one of those once really bubbly "bright" people who has dimmed because of fates hand and yes became complacent.. Thank u for sharing.. Mostly these just pop out of me at once and i never think about all the ways it can be viewed. Youve enlightened me thankx again
Date: 8/15/2015 7:35:00 AM
You are a very talented new blood, congrats on a top win!
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Rose Henderson
Date: 8/15/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thank you bunches Casarah ??
Date: 8/15/2015 1:53:00 AM
Rose, congrats on your 3rd place win:-) Alexis
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Rose Henderson
Date: 8/15/2015 2:14:00 AM
Thank you Alexis
Date: 8/15/2015 1:32:00 AM
Thank you Rose for entering the NEW BLOOD contest . Congratulations on you 3rd place win ! Bev
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Rose Henderson
Date: 8/15/2015 1:43:00 AM
Yay! Thank you Bev Yay again
Date: 8/10/2015 11:53:00 AM
Its nice to have people read this piece and see more than just the passion on the surface.. Thank you
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