Hidden New Blood

Hidden within the dark shadows of night
A dim flicker where once was a bright shining light.
Awaiting for someone who with curious intentions
Brings out desires too hot to mention

It seeps from within and the fire awakens 
The wind picks up its pace and the ground is shaken
All else leaves but two hearts pumping
The mind is lost, the body is humping

Each on a path to different ends
Where it leads all depends
One wanting to feel alive
The other only to survive.

Giving and taking what they desire
Soothing the struggles, igniting the fire
He leaves relieved and feeling quite right
She relaxes knowing all is ok for at least one more night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/20/2015 6:54:00 PM
Hi Rose, Congratulations --- Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:00:00 PM
Rose, Congratulations with your wonderful win! **SKAT**
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Date: 8/17/2015 9:28:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Rose! In modern times living in present is the most practical approach, Though we hope for gud in future too!!
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:55:00 AM
This is indeed hot, congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/15/2015 5:11:00 PM
All in a nights work. "Giving and taking what they desire"...sums it all up. Congrats on the win
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Date: 8/15/2015 12:06:00 PM
And life goes on. . . . This one captures the essence of a life that has become complacent, kind of sad one that reflects for me how many people have become today. congrats on your win.
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Rose Henderson
Date: 8/16/2015 3:46:00 AM
Very interesting.. Yes i can see where youre coming from.. Just maybe of one of those once really bubbly "bright" people who has dimmed because of fates hand and yes became complacent.. Thank u for sharing.. Mostly these just pop out of me at once and i never think about all the ways it can be viewed. Youve enlightened me thankx again
Date: 8/15/2015 7:35:00 AM
You are a very talented new blood, congrats on a top win!
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Rose Henderson
Date: 8/15/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thank you bunches Casarah ??
Date: 8/15/2015 1:53:00 AM
Rose, congrats on your 3rd place win:-) Alexis
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Rose Henderson
Date: 8/15/2015 2:14:00 AM
Thank you Alexis
Date: 8/10/2015 11:53:00 AM
Its nice to have people read this piece and see more than just the passion on the surface.. Thank you
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