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Hidden Moon

It's not so often That I get to see the moon, Clouds come in too soon, Or the city lights consume The splendor of the nightscape.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/21/2010 9:01:00 PM
Beautifully done here, Jim !! Reminds me of S.F. and even though I live further north in a much smaller town, it rains so that I'm not much of a stargazer ... smile ... congratulations on having your writing featured this week!!
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Date: 5/21/2010 7:02:00 AM
Congrats. To you Jim, a well done poem, for the featued poets, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/21/2010 7:01:00 AM
Jim, congrats on being featured this week. I enjoyed this Tanka. the moon is truly a gift, God Bless, mj
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Date: 5/21/2010 3:22:00 AM
Great descriptive Tanka that you have written in this one...It seems that modern man is separated from nature somewhat...Keep the creative pen flowing...Congratulations on your poem being featured on the home page this week..Sara
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Date: 5/19/2010 4:19:00 PM
Interesting scene you paint here. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing and sharing your words with us. Karen
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:03:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jim. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 2:58:00 PM
LOVE THE WRITE, BIG CONGRATS ON YOUR FEATURE ON THE FRONT PAGE, HOPE YOU GET A CHANCE TO STOP BY AND CHECK OUT MY BLOG, S.K.A.T.
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Date: 8/2/2008 1:04:00 PM
always buisy or sleep.
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Date: 7/26/2008 6:49:00 AM
Very well written, lovely flow and rhythm. Good atmosphere with a touch of yearning. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/25/2008 7:49:00 AM
So sad to not be able to witness the beauty of the moon, the magnificence as it serves as a romantic icon and just from a luminary perspective. Your thoughts are expressed so clearly and smoothly for a wonderful read. Michael
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