Hidden Love

You knocked, and I opened the door of my life
The welcome mat to my heart took in your first steps
You crossed the threshold and my strong foundation weakened with the weight of your words, your touch, your kiss
When you held me, all my broken pieces melted together 

As we entertained the thought of being together
An emotional bond built on trust fueled a desire we couldn’t deny 
While storms raged outside, threatening to wreck our world

I lay in bed wondering if you will come back to me
Two lovers denied the night, stealing moments in their days
A fire still burns inside of me, the glow of passion smolders deep within

You occupy the rooms of my soul yet I feel so abandoned 
A house whose walls hold secrets not meant for others to hear

We left the doors and windows wide open
The breeze whispers through, echoing your name 

The clock on the wall still chimes as time marches on
If I could stop it, I would, just for one more moment with you

It’s a place I visit often, but it’s not the same without you there
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 2/1/2024 12:22:00 AM
Love the poem, AJ. Thank you.
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Date: 5/8/2018 9:49:00 PM
I love the word choice and literary techniques used! Simply beautiful!
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