Lycia Harding Poet Rhyme

Hidden In the Snow

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Flakes from earths thin winter coat

coat lakes where skaters spin below.

Below the ice on which they float,

float perils hidden in the snow.

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Nov 19, 2015

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Dalia Shahein January 5, 2016 at 2:12 PM Congrats on ur win with this lovely poem....hugs / / :) dalia Lycia Harding January 6, 2016 at 11:55 AM Thank you, Dalia! xoxo

Kim Merryman November 25, 2015 at 5:38 PM Congrats on your win, Lycia! Love, Kim Lycia Harding November 25, 2015 at 7:09 PM Thank you, Kim! xoxoxo

Lin Lane November 21, 2015 at 4:09 AM Nicely written, Lycia. Congratulations. Lycia Harding November 21, 2015 at 10:05 AM Thank you, Lin! xoxo

Jan Allison November 21, 2015 at 3:49 AM love the form you used Lycia congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Lycia Harding November 21, 2015 at 10:08 AM Thank you, Jan! This is that style invented by Nette Oncloud where each line begins with the last word of the previous line. xoxo

Teddy Kimathi November 21, 2015 at 3:39 AM Congrats on your amazing WIN Lycia! ;-) Lycia Harding November 21, 2015 at 12:01 PM Thank you, T.K! xoxo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 21, 2015 at 12:03 AM How lovely Lycia .. congrats on awesome win! Lycia Harding November 21, 2015 at 12:04 PM Thank you, Dr. Sharma! xoxo

Skat A November 20, 2015 at 8:01 PM Lycia, Congratulations on your Snow Win. SKAT Lycia Harding November 21, 2015 at 10:02 AM Thank you, Skitty SKAT! xoxo

Eric Boddie November 18, 2015 at 8:43 PM hidden by the snow....snow is all they know....know that they will incite....incite the inspiration for this write....write your name on my heart as a forever friend....friend me so that all I can ever do is win....;) Lycia Harding November 18, 2015 at 11:07 PM Yay! You did it on your very first try! This format is fun but tricky, huh?

Lin Lane November 18, 2015 at 6:12 AM Hi, Lycia. I had to think about this one....you gave me an 'ummm' moment. It's really good. ~ Lin~ Lycia Harding November 18, 2015 at 10:15 AM Thank you, Lin! xoxo