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Hidden Crush

I had met this real nice guy at the gym one day, we just started to talk and I liked him; everything else but him faded to dim, I think he is wonderful like a bright sun ray. His voice is deep and into his eyes I could swim, he asked me for a coffee- I said yes; our chatter is great I must confess, and meet Saturdays for exercise at the gym. We are so calm together and there is no stress, talking of politics and our week; really on any subject we can speak, his salty grey-white hair I would like to caress. We have a friendship really special and unique, I have a huge crush on this awesome man; oh, from the moment we met it began, at my new poetry he takes a weekly peak. Wonder what would happen if I was more than fan, if friendship became a true romance; oh, maybe that leap is too great a chance, so will keep my crush hidden until I have a plan. _______________________________ April 1, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Hidden Crush Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1129-368-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Contest - I'm Crushing On You Sponsor - Julie Leigh Rodenheaver Sixth Place

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/2/2019 7:43:00 PM

Good luck, in this contest. I like this poem a lot as it draws me in and I ask, what would I do? Usually, I plan nothing..just give it time! The most perfect men can turn out to be jerks..that's my experience! They drop little signals along the way.))) Great poem...Panagiota

Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2019 4:52:00 PM

Panagiota, thanks for the visit and comment, appreciate ~

Ann Gilmour

Date: 4/2/2019 2:59:00 AM

Wow Constance I like the sound of this, so sweet and romantic, in the early throes maybe? Good luck in the contest and if this not fictional good luck with this too... kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2019 4:52:00 PM

Ann, thanks for visiting and the comment, appreciate

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 4/2/2019 12:00:00 AM

So adorable and well done. I hope he gets to read this one day :)

Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2019 4:53:00 PM

Kyle, thanks for the compliment, my only worry is if taking it to a different level, will the friendship survive ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/1/2019 9:35:00 PM

If this is a real man, I think you know what to do. If not, get out there and "ring those bells" as Liza Minelli would sing. A great start! I can feel this crush, and it is sound.

Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2019 4:54:00 PM

Caren, thanks for the visit and comment ~